Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Of course, I remember when I was 5 my grandpa teach me how to ride a bike at the beach.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Actually I think yes, but some parents may thought that to ride a bike on the road was dangerous, so some people don't learn how to ride.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 68.0Suggestion: 句子要更符合语法并且适当扩展细节以使表达自然流畅。注意时态和主谓一致(例如 teach → taught),并在需要时使用连接词补充具体细节(比如描述学会过程或感受),但不要超过五句。可以加入一到两句关于学习过程或感受的支持细节,使回答更完整。
Example: Yes, I did. My grandpa taught me to ride a bike when I was five at the beach. I remember he held the seat at first and ran alongside me until I felt confident. After a few tries I could pedal steadily, and I felt really proud.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 表达要更准确并提供更具体的原因或例子。注意语法(may thought → may think/think, don’t → don’t learn how to ride → choose not to teach their children)和逻辑衔接,使用连接词(for example, because)来解释原因。可加入一两句描述普及情况的具体情景或对比。
Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. However, many parents worry about road safety because traffic can be heavy, so they sometimes avoid teaching their children to cycle. For example, in big cities people prefer public transport, while in smaller towns cycling is still common.
× Of course, I remember when I was 5 my grandpa teach me how to ride a bike at the beach.
✓ Of course, I remember when I was 5 my grandpa taught me how to ride a bike at the beach.
问题类型(第三人称单数/动词时态):句中主语是过去的第三人称单数(my grandpa),动词应使用过去式或第三人称单数形式。原句使用现在时态动词 teach,不符合时间状语“when I was 5”所指的过去时间。正确用过去式 taught。建议:注意与时间状语一致,表示过去的动作用一般过去时。
× Actually I think yes, but some parents may thought that to ride a bike on the road was dangerous, so some people don't learn how to ride.
✓ Actually I think so, but some parents may think that riding a bike on the road is dangerous, so some people don't learn how to ride.
问题类型(过去时/情态动词搭配及动名词用法):原句中使用了情态动词 may 后接过去式 thought,这是错误的搭配(may 后应接动词原形 think)。另外表达“骑自行车”作为概念时更自然用动名词 riding,而不是不定式 to ride;句中时态也需与一般现在观点保持一致,将 was 改为 is。最后,前半句的固定表达为 "I think so" 比 "I think yes" 更常用。建议:情态动词后用原形;用动名词表示动作概念;注意时态一致性。