Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar and reduce fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two brief supporting details using linking words. Fix verb forms (learned to ride, taught me to ride) and avoid repeating phrases.

Example: Yes. I learned to ride a bike when I was three, and my father taught me. It was a memorable moment because I felt proud and excited; after that I rode almost every day and improved quickly.

Suggestion: Organize the answer with a clear opinion sentence, use correct grammar and more specific details, and avoid hesitations and repetition. Use linking words (because, therefore, for example) and correct expressions (Iranians, like riding bikes, care about the environment). Complete your thought instead of trailing off.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in Iran because many Iranians care about the environment and want to reduce air pollution. For example, in recent years more people have chosen cycling for short trips and cities have added bike lanes to encourage it.

× Well, yes, when I was, uh, three years old, I learned to how, uh, riding a bike, uh, and uh, my father taught me to, how to ride a bike and it was the funniest moment that I ever had.

✓ Well, yes, when I was three years old, I learned how to ride a bike, and my father taught me to ride a bike, and it was the funniest moment I ever had.

The sentence contains several past-tense constructions but incorrect verb forms and word order. 'learned to how, riding a bike' mixes infinitive and -ing forms; correct is 'learned how to ride a bike' or 'learned to ride a bike'. 'taught me to, how to ride' should be 'taught me to ride' or 'taught me how to ride'. Also, 'that I ever had' is wordy; in past reference use 'I ever had' without 'that'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense verbs and correct infinitive forms: 'learned how to ride' and 'taught me how to ride'.

× Though, in my opinion, uh, most of Iranian like to riding a bike, uh, since, uh, they really care about uh, environment and uh, air pollution, They really try to, uh, riding a bike, uh, and they, they don't, they don't really like to uh, making a.

✓ In my opinion, most Iranians like riding bikes, since they really care about the environment and air pollution. They really try to ride bikes, and they don't really like making a[...]

Errors are incorrect use of verb + -ing and infinitive forms. 'like to riding' should be either 'like riding' or 'like to ride'. 'most of Iranian' is a singular/plural and noun form error; correct is 'most Iranians'. 'they really try to, uh, riding a bike' should be 'they try to ride bikes' (infinitive after 'try to'). 'making a.' is incomplete; likely 'making a lot of pollution' or similar. Also use articles: 'the environment'. Suggestions: use plural noun 'Iranians', use 'like riding' or 'like to ride', use 'try to' + base verb, and include appropriate complement after 'making'.