Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (umm) and repetitive phrases. Also correct tense and word forms (e.g., "was" not "is" for past possession; "bought" not "buy").

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My grandmother bought it for my birthday, and I treasured it because it gave me freedom to explore my neighborhood. Even now I remember riding it every weekend, which makes it one of my most important childhood memories.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use correct vocabulary and avoid repetition. Begin with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Correct word choices: "bikes", "commute", "affordable", "ride". Keep it to 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, they are inexpensive and easy to park, so a lot of students and low-income workers prefer riding bikes to save money.

× Yes, I had one and it is always be my favorite since day one because umm my grandma buy it for like my my birth for my birthday and I really liked it and I always umm like defended until now and it is very one of them one of the most important in my life.

✓ Yes, I had one and it has always been my favorite since day one because my grandma bought it for my birthday. I really liked it and I have always kept it until now; it is one of the most important things in my life.

Multiple past/present tense errors: 'is always be' should be present perfect 'has always been' to show a state from the past continuing to the present. 'buy' should be past 'bought' because the action occurred in the past. 'for like my my birth for my birthday' is redundant and incorrect phrasing; use 'for my birthday'. 'I really liked it and I always umm like defended until now' mixes past and present and uses wrong verb 'defended'; use present perfect 'I have always kept it' to indicate continuous possession. Also 'it is very one of them one of the most important in my life' is ungrammatical; correct to 'it is one of the most important things in my life.' Suggestion: use consistent tense (past for completed past actions, present perfect for actions continuing to present) and choose correct verbs (bought, kept).

× Literally popular because by is the most like it very popular in my country because people usually use it to go to the work, to go to work or to go to school.

✓ Bicycles are very popular in my country because people usually use them to go to work or to school.

Problems: sentence fragment and wrong pronoun/word forms. 'Literally popular because by is the most like it very popular' is ungrammatical; use full clause 'Bicycles are very popular'. 'by' is incorrect; use 'bicycles' or 'they'. 'people usually use it' should be 'people usually use them' (plural agreement). Remove redundant 'to go to the work' — use 'to go to work'. Suggestion: start with a clear subject and use correct plural pronouns and natural collocations ('go to work', 'go to school').

× It's easy to use and it's it's very cheap in my country and it is affordable to write to somewhere wherever they want.

✓ They are easy to use and very cheap in my country, and they are affordable for people to ride wherever they want.

Errors: 'It's' singular conflicts with plural 'bicycles' — use 'They are'. Repetition 'it's it's' removed. 'Affordable to write' uses wrong verb 'write' instead of 'ride'. 'to somewhere wherever they want' is awkward; use 'to ride wherever they want.' Suggestion: ensure subject-verb number agreement and use correct verbs (ride) and clearer prepositional phrases ('affordable for people to ride wherever they want').