Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 在回答中要更自然流畅，减少重复的填充词（如 uh, um）。结构上先给出直接答案，然后用1-2句具体细节支持，例如说明年龄、骑行用途或感受。尽量使用连词（because, so, therefore）使句子更连贯，并注意时态一致（过去时）。可以将句子控制在不超过五句。

Example: Yes, I did. When I was in primary school my mother bought me a bicycle because I needed to travel to a tutoring centre to prepare for the junior school entrance exam. It made getting there much easier and saved me a lot of time, so I could study more.

Suggestion: 回答要更准确用词并减少停顿。避免模糊或错误的词汇（如 write → ride）。先给直接结论，然后用1-2个具体事实或例子支持（如共享单车的普及方式、场景或优点）。使用连词（for example, because）提高连贯性，并保持句子简洁。

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use app-based shared bicycles to commute to work or school because they are cheap and convenient — you just scan a QR code on your phone to unlock one.

× So my mom bought me a bike, uh, for me to go to an institution easily.

✓ So my mom bought me a bike so I could go to school more easily.

原句使用了不自然的表达“for me to go to an institution easily”。这里主要问题是动词时态和结构不当：母亲在过去买了自行车，应该用过去时描述接下来的目的或结果，常用的结构是“so (that) + 主语 + could + 动词”来表示过去的目的或能力。并且“institution”用在这里不常见，英语中更自然的说法是“school”。建议采用“so I could go to school more easily”。

× Uh, when I was in primary school, uh, I have to, uh, study hard to pass the entrance exam for Junior School.

✓ When I was in primary school, I had to study hard to pass the entrance exam for junior school.

原句时态不一致：句首是过去时间状语“when I was in primary school”，但随后使用了现在时“have to”，应改为过去时“had to”。另外“Junior School”首字母不必大写，除非指特定学校名称。建议将动词调整为过去时以保持时间一致性。

× Uh, people mostly, uh, write, uh, sharing bike to, uh, uh, go to work or go to school.

✓ People mostly use shared bikes to go to work or to school.

原句中使用了“write”显然是错误动词，应为“use”。“sharing bike”也不符合常用表达，应该是“shared bike(s)”或“shared bikes”。另外语序和重复停顿影响句子结构，应简化为“People mostly use shared bikes to go to work or to school”。

× Uh, people just need to scan a QR code on their phone and then can use that sharing bike.

✓ People just need to scan a QR code on their phone and then can use the shared bike.

原句“that sharing bike”搭配不自然，应改为“the shared bike”或“a shared bike”。此外句子结构可以保持原有的情态动词“can”，只是要修正名词短语为更自然的表达。建议将“that sharing bike”改为“the shared bike”或“a shared bike”。