Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Correct grammar and pronunciation, be concise, and organize into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details. Use past tense consistently for childhood memories, avoid repetition, and choose appropriate words (e.g., "brought" not "brought me a bra"). Add a brief specific detail (where you rode or who with) and one linking word for coherence.

Example: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, and I often rode it with my friends along the lane beside my house. My father bought it for me as a birthday present, and we would spend afternoons racing each other.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence (opinion), then support it with clear reasons using linking words. Use correct grammar and smoother phrasing (e.g., "not very popular because of the hot climate"). Provide a specific example or consequence (e.g., people prefer motorbikes or public transport). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Example: I don't think bicycles are very popular in Thailand because the climate is hot and humid. As a result, many people prefer to use motorbikes or cars for convenience, especially for longer trips.

× Of course, when I were shy, I have a bike.

✓ Of course, when I was a child, I had a bike.

The sentence mixes incorrect tense and wrong word choice. 'were' should be 'was' for singular first-person past (past tense of to be). 'shy' is the wrong word — context needs 'child'. 'have' is present tense but the context is past, so change to 'had'. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for past events: 'I was a child' and 'I had a bike.'

× I I like to play to bike in a side by side side of the my house side of my house and I bike with my friends.

✓ I liked to ride my bike beside my house and I rode with my friends.

The original has multiple issues: incorrect verb choice and tense, repeated words, wrong preposition and article. 'like to play to bike' is ungrammatical; use 'liked to ride' (past preference and correct verb). 'in a side by side side of the my house side of my house' should be 'beside my house' (correct preposition and remove duplicate words; remove extra article 'the' before 'my house'). Also change 'I bike with my friends' to past 'I rode with my friends' to match past narrative. Suggestion: keep verbs in past when talking about childhood and use 'ride' for bikes and 'beside' or 'next to' for location.

× My father brought me a bra.

✓ My father bought me a bike.

This is likely a word choice or typographical error: 'brought me a bra' is incorrect in context. The intended meaning is 'bought me a bike.' 'Bought' is the past tense of 'buy' and fits the past narrative. Suggestion: use the correct verb and noun: 'bought me a bike.'

× I I think it's is quite not quite not popular because in Thailand have a hot weather.

✓ I think it's not very popular because Thailand has hot weather.

Issues: repeated words 'I I' and 'it's is', awkward negation 'quite not quite not', incorrect subject-verb structure 'in Thailand have'. Use 'I think' (present opinion), 'it's not very popular', and 'Thailand has hot weather' (subject 'Thailand' requires verb 'has'). Suggestion: eliminate duplicates and use correct subject-verb agreement: 'Thailand has.'

× So PE hold on don't much use bike because it's hot.

✓ So people don't often use bikes because it's hot.

Original contains unclear fragments: 'PE hold on' seems to be 'people', and 'don't much use bike' is ungrammatical. Use plural subject 'people' with 'don't', adverb placement 'don't often use', plural 'bikes' or 'use bikes'. Suggestion: use 'people don't often use bikes' or 'people rarely use bikes' to express frequency and plural form.