Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, correct grammar and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details. Use past tense consistently for childhood events, avoid repetition, and include a linking word for coherence. For example, start with: “No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” Then add a reason: “because I was afraid of riding and never learned.” You can add a brief consequence: “As a result, I usually walked or took the bus to school.”

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because I was afraid of riding and never learned properly. As a result, I usually walked or took the bus to school.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence, correct noun forms and concise supporting details. Use linking words (for example, because, for instance) and give a specific example or statistic if possible. Say “Yes, bikes are popular” then explain why (e.g., bike-sharing systems, convenience) and finish with a brief result or personal view. Avoid fragments and repetition.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in Taiwan because of widespread bike-sharing systems like YouBike that people can rent using a card or mobile app. For example, many commuters use shared bikes for short trips, which reduces traffic and is very convenient.

× 'No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I'm not good at ride a bike and I'm afraid of riding a bike, so I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding a bike and I was afraid of riding a bike.'

'The sentence mixes present tense (do/I'm) with past time reference (when I was a child). Use past tense throughout to match the time frame. Also use the gerund form riding after good at and avoid repeating information. Suggestion: maintain past tense for events in the past and use verbs with correct forms (wasn't good at riding).'

× 'No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I'm not good at ride a bike and I'm afraid of riding a bike, so I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding a bike and I was afraid of riding a bike.'

'The phrase good at requires a verb in the -ing form (a gerund), so ride should be riding. Consistently use riding after prepositions like at and after adjectives like afraid of. Suggestion: use "good at riding" and "afraid of riding."'

× 'No, I don't have a bike when I was a child because I'm not good at ride a bike and I'm afraid of riding a bike, so I didn't have a bike when I was a child.'

✓ 'No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I wasn't good at riding a bike and I was afraid of riding a bike.'

'The response contains present-tense verbs (don't have, I'm) while referring to childhood. Replace present forms with past forms: did not have, was not (wasn't). Suggestion: align verb tense with the past time phrase "when I was a child."'

× 'Yes, I think bike is very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have you bike this transportation tools that people can use their cars or even cell phones.'

✓ 'Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have YouBike, a transportation service that people can use with their cards or even cell phones.'

'Prepositions and small function words are incorrect or missing. Use "in Taiwan" (correct), but say "use with" their cards or phones. Also articles and noun forms needed: "a transportation service". Suggestion: use appropriate prepositions (use with) and add articles to clarify meaning.'

× 'Yes, I think bike is very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have you bike this transportation tools that people can use their cars or even cell phones.'

✓ 'Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have YouBike, a transportation service that people can use with their cards or even cell phones.'

'The noun bike should be plural when speaking generally (bikes are). Also tools should be singular or rephrased: "a transportation service" or "transportation tools". Suggestion: use plural for general statements (bikes are) and match noun number with verbs.'

× 'Yes, I think bike is very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have you bike this transportation tools that people can use their cars or even cell phones. They can rent a bike and then and then ride. So I.'

✓ 'Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have YouBike, a transportation service that people can use with their cards or even cell phones. They can rent a bike and then ride it.'

'Articles are missing or incorrect: use "a transportation service" and include "a" before bike when referring to one bike. Also pronoun "it" is needed after "ride" when specifying the rented bike. Suggestion: include articles where required and use object pronouns after verbs like ride.'

× 'They can rent a bike and then and then ride. So I.'

✓ 'They can rent a bike and then ride it.'

'The original has repetition "and then and then" and an unfinished fragment "So I." Remove repetition and complete the thought. Also include the object "it" after ride to show what is being ridden. Suggestion: avoid repetition and ensure sentences are complete.'

× 'Yes, I think bike is very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have you bike this transportation tools that people can use their cars or even cell phones.'

✓ 'Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because in Taiwan we have YouBike, a transportation service that people can use with their cards or even cell phones.'

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