Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak in the past tense consistently, use a clear topic sentence, simplify and correct grammar, and add one or two concise specific details. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make the reason clear. Keep it under five sentences and avoid redundant phrases.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I asked my father many times because I wanted to ride to school, but he couldn't afford one at that time. So I grew up walking and using public transport instead.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce fillers (uh, um), and provide two specific reasons linked with cohesive words (for example, because, furthermore). Use precise vocabulary (congested, convenient) and keep answers within five sentences.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are becoming popular in my country. Firstly, they are convenient because they can pass through narrow streets and save time in congested areas. Furthermore, they are cheap to buy and maintain, so many people choose them for short commutes.

× I don't have a bike.

✓ I didn't have a bike.

The question asks about the past (when you were a child). Using present tense 'don't have' is incorrect. Change to past tense 'didn't have' to match the time frame. Suggestion: Pay attention to time expressions and choose past tense for past situations.

× When I was child, I beg many times to my father to brought me a bike, but our financial condition was not that enough in that moment.

✓ When I was a child, I begged many times to my father to bring me a bike, but our financial situation was not good enough at that time.

Multiple errors: missing article before 'child' (use 'a child'), verb tense and form errors ('beg' should be past 'begged'; 'to brought me' should be infinitive 'to bring me'), word choice and collocation ('financial condition' -> 'financial situation'; 'not that enough' -> 'not good enough'), and time expression ('in that moment' -> 'at that time'). These corrections fix subject-verb tense, verb form, article use, and collocation. Suggestion: Use 'a child' for the phrase, use past simple for past actions, and use 'to' + base verb for requests ('to bring').

× So that was the reason that my dad was unable to brought me up by but however.

✓ So that was the reason my dad was unable to buy me one, however.

This sentence has incorrect verb form ('brought' should be base verb or past participle in appropriate structure; here intended 'buy me one'), wrong phrasal structure ('brought me up by' is incorrect), and redundant connectors ('but however'). Rewriting clarifies meaning: 'unable to buy me one' and keep either 'so' or 'however' but not both; here 'however' placed at end is acceptable. Suggestion: Use correct verbs for actions (buy vs bring), avoid redundant conjunctions, and ensure verb forms match the auxiliary or sentence structure.

× Yes, I think bikes are more popular transportation nowadays in our country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are a more popular form of transportation nowadays in our country.

Countable noun 'transportation' needs a determiner and clearer phrasing. 'Bikes are more popular transportation' is ungrammatical; use 'a more popular form of transportation' or 'more popular as transportation'. Also present tense 'think' is fine. Suggestion: Use 'a' with singular noun phrases and consider 'form of transportation' for clarity.

× Uh, there's several reason behind this.

✓ There are several reasons behind this.

Subject-verb agreement and count noun form: 'there's' (there is) is singular but 'several reason' should be plural. Use 'there are' and plural 'reasons'. Suggestion: Match 'there is/are' with singular/plural noun and pluralize countable nouns when using quantifiers like 'several'.

× First of all, uh, it's uh, easy to use and uh, needs a narrow space to go through and, and Dhaka is a very traffic umm, country.

✓ First of all, it's easy to use and needs only a narrow space to pass through, and Dhaka has very heavy traffic.

Multiple issues: 'needs a narrow space to go through' is awkward — use 'needs only a narrow space to pass through'. 'Dhaka is a very traffic country' is incorrect collocation: use 'Dhaka has very heavy traffic' or 'Dhaka is a very congested city'. Also unnecessary fillers 'uh'. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs for traffic ('has heavy traffic') and clearer expressions for movement ('pass through').