Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear, relevant and natural with a good structure (topic sentence, supporting details). To improve further, make it slightly more concise and add one brief linking phrase to show sequence or cause (for example: “As a result” or “After that”), and avoid small redundancies (e.g., “bicycle” and “bike” used variably). Also vary vocabulary a little (use verbs like “cycled” or “commuted”) to show range.

Example: Yes — I did. My parents bought me a red bicycle when I was seven, and I cycled to the park every weekend. After several weeks of practice, I managed to ride without training wheels, which made me feel very proud.

Suggestion: The answer is relevant but brief and slightly repetitive. To improve, start with a direct topic sentence, then add a specific reason and an example or comparison. Use a linking word to connect your opinion and reason (for example: “because”, “for example”, or “in addition”). Also include one additional detail about adults or infrastructure to show broader awareness.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many families encourage cycling from a young age. For example, I often see children riding without training wheels at the park, and there are also many bike lanes in my city that make cycling convenient for adults.

× Yes I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was 7 and I used it to ride to the park every weekend.

✓ Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend.

Run-on sentence and punctuation: The original lacks a comma after 'Yes' and between clauses, making it a run-on. Also the numeral 7 should be written as a word in formal writing. Suggestion: add a comma after 'Yes' and before 'and' to separate independent clauses, and write numbers as words ('seven') in this context.

× I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels, which made me very proud.

✓ I remember practicing until I could ride without training wheels, which made me very proud.

This sentence is grammatically correct and uses the verb + -ing form 'practicing' appropriately after 'remember' to indicate a past memory of an action. No correction needed.

× Yes I do, because every time I go to the park I see kids riding on bicycles without training wheels.

✓ Yes, I do, because every time I go to the park I see kids riding bicycles without training wheels.

Minor punctuation and word choice: add a comma after 'Yes' and remove the preposition 'on' after 'riding' because 'ride bicycles' or 'ride bikes' is more natural in English. The present tense 'do' and 'see' correctly describe habitual actions, so keep the present tense.