Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is direct and concise, which is good, but it is very short and misses an opportunity to add supporting details. To improve, add a brief topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "however") and keep it under five sentences. Mention why you didn’t have one, who influenced that, or what you used instead.

Example: No, I didn’t. I grew up in a small apartment and my parents thought it was unsafe, so they didn’t buy one for me. Instead, I usually walked to nearby places or used public transport when I was a child.

Suggestion: The answer gives a clear opinion but is informal and slightly repetitive. Improve by using more precise vocabulary, varying sentence structure, and adding a specific example or reason with a linking word (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid filler phrases like "stuff like that."

Example: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short commutes. For example, many office workers and students ride bikes to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× Like most of the people use bike to go to office, to go to school, stuff like that.

✓ Like most people use bikes to go to the office, to go to school, and things like that.

Errors: 'most of the people' is awkward; 'most people' is preferred (quantifier). 'use bike' requires plural 'bikes' or article; general statements use plural. 'go to office' needs definite article 'the office'. 'stuff like that' is informal; 'and things like that' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'most people', plural nouns for general statements, include articles for specific places, and prefer clearer phrases in formal speech.