Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Speak in the past tense and give a clear topic sentence. Avoid fillers and repetition. Provide one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). For example say clearly whether you had a bike, why you didn’t, and mention any related experience or consequence.

Example: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn’t afford one. As a result, I usually walked to school and sometimes borrowed a neighbour’s bike on weekends.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion sentence, use correct subject-verb agreement, and give specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because", "so", "for example"). Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "environmentally friendly", "good for health"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and environmentally friendly. For example, many people cycle to work to save money and to stay healthy.

× As for me, no, I don't, uh, ride a bike, umm, when I a child because I can't, I I was can't ride and bike my childhood.

✓ No, I didn't. I didn't ride a bike when I was a child because I couldn't ride a bike during my childhood.

This sentence contains multiple errors that fit under sentence structure errors and tense problems: incorrect tense forms ('don't' should be past 'didn't'), missing verb 'was' in 'when I a child', incorrect modal/past form 'can't' should be 'couldn't', and awkward repetition. Suggestion: break into two clear sentences, use past tense for past situations: 'I didn't ride' and 'I couldn't'. Remove filler words and repetitions. Use 'during my childhood' or 'when I was a child' for clarity.

× Definitely the most people in the world rides and bikes because it is give a nature and it is help improve health healthy.

✓ Definitely most people in the world ride bikes because it gives them a chance to connect with nature and helps improve health.

Several issues: subject-verb agreement ('people' is plural so use 'ride', not 'rides'); unnecessary 'and' between verbs; incorrect verb forms and awkward phrases ('it is give a nature' should be 'it gives a chance to connect with nature'); 'it is help improve health healthy' mixes forms—use 'helps improve health' or 'is good for health'. Suggestion: use plural verb with plural subject, simplify clauses, and choose appropriate verb forms ('gives', 'helps') and nouns ('health').