Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then give one or two specific supporting details (when, who, how you used it). Avoid confusing or mixed phrases (e.g. “my parents both made a bike” is unclear). Use correct tense and articles. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “when” or “so” appropriately.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it shortly after I started high school, and my parents bought it for me so I could ride to school and around the neighborhood.

Suggestion: Answer directly then give a clear reason with specific detail. Use correct subject-verb agreement (bikes are) and avoid repeated filler words. Use a linking phrase like “because” and give a concrete example of who uses bikes and for what purpose. Keep it concise (1–2 sentences).

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Because I live in the countryside, many people use bicycles every day to commute to work, go to school, or visit nearby markets.

× Yes, actually I tried a bike when I was a child when I got a high school and my parents both made a bike.

✓ Yes, actually I tried riding a bike when I was a child; when I was in high school my parents bought me a bike.

Errors: 'tried a bike' is incorrect; use 'tried riding a bike' (verb + -ing) to show attempting an activity (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'when I got a high school' is ungrammatical; use 'when I was in high school' (sentence structure and correct noun phrase). 'my parents both made a bike' is wrong: native meaning is parents bought a bike for the student, so use 'bought me a bike' (verb choice). Suggestions: use verb+ -ing after 'tried', use correct idiomatic time expression 'in high school', and use correct verb 'bought' for acquisition. Note: Corrections were limited to categories listed; primary issue is verb+ -ing and sentence structure.

× Yes, it's quite popular because I live in the countryside and bikes is the means of transport that some most of the must have must most people use to commute in their daily life.

✓ Yes, they're quite popular because I live in the countryside and bikes are the means of transport that most people use to commute in their daily life.

Errors: 'bikes is' has subject-verb number disagreement — plural subject 'bikes' requires plural verb 'are' (Grammar Problem Type 1 and subject-verb agreement type 27). The sentence also contains redundant and confused words 'some most of the must have must most' which should be simplified to 'most people'. 'it's quite popular' is wrong for plural subject; use 'they're quite popular' or rephrase to 'bikes are quite popular'. Suggestions: ensure subject and verb agree in number, remove redundant words, and use clear quantifier 'most people'.