Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is direct and natural but very brief and lacks supporting detail. To improve, add a topic sentence plus 1–2 specific supporting details (e.g., what kind of bike, who gave it to you, where you rode it, a brief memory). Use a linking phrase if you add more than one detail. Keep it under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for me when I was six. I often rode it around the park near our house after school, and learning to ride it was one of my fondest childhood memories.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question and gives reasons, but language is repetitive and a bit awkward (capitalisation, phrasing). Improve by using varied vocabulary, clearer linking words, and a specific example or comparison to support your point. Aim for 2–3 sentences and avoid repeating words like 'vehicles' and 'Wheelers'.

Example: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are affordable and easy to park. For example, many commuters choose motorbikes or bicycles for short trips in congested cities, which saves time compared with driving a car.

× People use vehicles which are two Wheelers instead of four Wheeler cars because it is more convenient.

✓ People use two-wheeler vehicles instead of four-wheeler cars because they are more convenient.

The original sentence misuses capitalization and the noun/adjective order. 'two Wheelers' and 'four Wheeler' should be adjective-noun forms with lowercase and hyphens: 'two-wheeler' and 'four-wheeler'. Also the pronoun 'it' is incorrect when referring to plural 'vehicles'; use 'they'. Suggest writing 'two-wheeler vehicles' or simply 'two-wheelers' and ensure pronoun agreement: 'they are more convenient.'

× This is because I see them on a daily basis on the roads.

✓ This is because I see them on a daily basis on the road.

The phrase 'on the roads' is not incorrect in all contexts but 'on the road' is more natural when speaking generally about traffic. To be precise, use 'on the road' for general observations. Also keep 'on a daily basis' together; no extra preposition change is needed beyond choosing 'on the road.'