Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, I do, because I think it is very useful to move to move.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 質問をそのまま繰り返すのは避け、話題に直接答えてください。答えはトピック文で始め、必要なら短い補足を1~2文で付けて具体性(どんな自転車か、いつまで乗っていたか、思い出など)を加えましょう。接続詞(for example, because, so)を使って文を論理的につなげるとより自然に聞こえます。
Example: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle with training wheels until I was about seven. Because it was easy to ride, I used it to visit my friends and go to the park almost every day.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 簡潔に意見を述べた後、具体的な理由や例を一つか二つ加えると良いです。繰り返しや文法ミス("to move to move")を避け、適切な語彙(commute, exercise, environment-friendly)や接続詞(because, for example, so)で説明をつなげてください。文は最大5文までに留め、冗長にならないようにしましょう。
Example: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, students and workers often cycle to school or the station since it is cheaper and faster than taking a bus.
× Yes, I do, because I think it is very useful to move to move.
✓ Yes, I do, because I think bikes are very useful for getting around.
The original sentence repeats 'to move' which is ungrammatical and unclear. Replace the repetition with a clear noun phrase or verb phrase. Use 'bikes' (plural) to match the earlier subject and 'are' for present tense. Use the prepositional phrase 'for getting around' to express usefulness for travel or short trips. Also avoid pronoun 'it' which was ambiguous; use the plural 'bikes' to agree with 'bikes are popular' and maintain subject-verb agreement.