Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct the confusion about training wheels, and add one or two specific details (e.g., how old you were when you learned, a memorable place you rode). Use linking words to connect ideas and keep to 2–4 short sentences.

Example: Yes, I did. It was a big black bike with removable training wheels, and I learned to ride on it when I was about six. I used to cycle around our neighborhood every afternoon, especially to the small park near my house.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence, avoid informal contractions like 'cause' and vague phrasing such as 'most people write.' Provide specific reasons and link them logically (e.g., affordability, convenience, environmental benefits). Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

Example: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially in rural provinces. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, and many people prefer them because they are less polluting than cars.

× Yes, it is popular 'cause that's what most people write here in our provinces because it's less polluting and cheaper.

✓ Yes, they are popular because that's what most people ride here in our provinces since they're less polluting and cheaper.

The sentence has a subject-reference mismatch and verb choice errors. 'Bikes' is plural, so the pronoun and verb must be plural ('they are' not 'it is'). 'Write' is incorrect contextually; the correct verb is 'ride'. Use 'because' or 'since' for reasons; avoid colloquial ' 'cause' in formal grammar. Also maintain consistent plural agreement with the adjective 'cheaper' by referring to 'they' or 'bikes'. Suggested improvement: identify the noun's number, match pronouns and verbs to that number, and choose verbs that fit the action (ride a bike, not write).