Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify and simplify your response. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), give one or two specific details, use linking words, correct grammar (use past tense and correct nouns), and avoid repetition. Keep it within 2–4 sentences. For example, say you had a small bike with training wheels, mention at what age or how you used it, and finish with why you stopped riding.

Example: Yes, I had a small bicycle when I was a child. It had two training wheels which helped me learn to balance, and I used it to ride around my neighborhood with friends. As I grew older I didn’t ride it much because I became busy with school.

Suggestion: Make a clear opinion sentence, then support it with specific reasons and examples, use linking words, and correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, singular/plural). Avoid vague phrases. Keep answer concise (2–3 sentences).

Example: I think traditional bicycles are less popular now than before. In recent years many people prefer electric bikes and electric cars because they are convenient, eco-friendly, and save time on longer commutes, so people have more transport options.

× And after that when I growing up I'm not ready anymore.

✓ And after that, when I grew up I wasn't ready anymore.

The original uses 'growing' incorrectly without an auxiliary; the sentence requires a past tense form 'grew up' to match 'after that' and past context, and the negative needs past 'wasn't' not 'I'm not'. Suggestion: use simple past 'grew up' and past negation 'wasn't'.

× Yes I do have I do have a bike one with a little child and at that time my little bike also even have a 2 even have two Excelsior views to help me to balance.

✓ Yes, I had a small bike with training wheels; at that time my little bike even had two Excelsior wheels to help me balance.

Multiple errors: tense and agreement with 'do have' vs past context (use 'had'), and plural agreement ('have' should be 'had' for singular subject in past). Also 'a 2' is incorrect numeral article use and 'views' is wrong word; 'wheels' fits. Suggestion: use past tense 'had' and correct noun 'wheels' and remove redundant repetition. Use commas and connectors for clarity.

× Well, I think it's not really popular.

✓ Well, I don't think they are very popular.

The sentence uses 'it's' (it is) ambiguously; 'bikes' is plural so use 'they are' or 'they're'. Also 'not really popular' is informal; use 'not very popular'. Suggestion: match verb number to 'bikes' and use appropriate negation form.

× Recent years in my country, especially the electric B bike and the electric cars and become more and more popular, people have more choices and that are also very green and convenient.

✓ In recent years in my country, especially electric bikes and electric cars have become more and more popular; people have more choices, and they are also very green and convenient.

This sentence has structural issues: missing preposition 'In' before 'recent years', incorrect subject-verb agreement ('electric bikes and electric cars have become' is correct), unnecessary conjunction 'and' before 'become', and pronoun agreement ('that are' should be 'they are'). Suggestion: begin with 'In recent years', use plural subjects with correct verb 'have become', separate clauses with punctuation, and use 'they' to refer to plural nouns.