Part 1
Examiner
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidate
Yes, I used to have a bike when I was a child. I quite good as a riding a bike when I was young, especially at primary school. Yes.
Examiner
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidate
Yes, I think it's popular in my country, but it depends of the city. Depends of the place. Especially when I was child, I was born in uh quite big city, so I often take a train and only sometimes I use bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Score: 62.0Suggestion: 回答は直接的だが、文法ミスや不自然な表現があり、詳細も乏しいです。まずは文法(過去形と形容詞の使い方)を直し、1文目で明確に答え、2〜3文で具体的なエピソードや頻度を加えてください。接続詞(for example, when, because)を用いて情報を整理するとより自然です。発音や語順の簡潔さにも注意しましょう。
Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I was quite good at riding it, especially during primary school, when I practiced almost every weekend. For example, I used to race with my friends around the local park, which helped me become more confident on two wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Score: 58.0Suggestion: 答えは意図が伝わるが、繰り返しや文法の誤り(depends of → depends on)、時制混乱や曖昧な表現が目立ちます。まず主張(Yes/No)を明確に述べ、その後に理由を2文程度で示してください。比較語や具体的な例(large cities vs small towns, public transport availability)を使い、接続詞(however, because, for example)で論理をつなげると良いです。
Example: Yes, bicycles are popular in my country, but their use varies by city. In large cities people tend to use trains and buses because public transport is convenient; however, in smaller towns and rural areas many people cycle daily for short trips because it's cheaper and easier.
× I quite good as a riding a bike when I was young, especially at primary school.
✓ I was quite good at riding a bike when I was young, especially in primary school.
The sentence mixes present form 'I quite good' with past-time context 'when I was young'. Use past tense 'was'. The preposition 'at' is required with 'good' (good at). Use the gerund 'riding' without extra article. Use 'in primary school' for location/time period. Suggestion: say 'I was quite good at riding a bike when I was young, especially in primary school.'
× Yes, I think it's popular in my country, but it depends of the city.
✓ Yes, I think it's popular in my country, but it depends on the city.
The verb 'depend' requires the preposition 'on', not 'of'. Also 'it' refers to 'bikes' which is acceptable. Suggestion: use 'depends on' when indicating what something is contingent upon.
× Depends of the place.
✓ It depends on the place.
This fragment lacks a subject and uses incorrect preposition 'of'. Convert to full sentence with subject 'It' and correct preposition 'on'. Suggestion: 'It depends on the place.'
× Especially when I was child, I was born in uh quite big city, so I often take a train and only sometimes I use bike.
✓ Especially when I was a child: I was born in a fairly large city, so I often took the train and only sometimes used a bike.
Multiple issues: 'when I was child' requires the article 'a child'. 'Quite big city' needs articles and natural adjective order: 'a fairly large city' or 'quite a big city'. Tense should remain past for past events: 'I often took the train and only sometimes used a bike.' Use 'the train' for a habitual means of transport and 'used a bike' with article. Suggestion: keep past tense and include articles: 'I was born in a fairly large city, so I often took the train and only sometimes used a bike.'