Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cải thiện ngữ pháp cơ bản và trật tự từ; phát âm rõ ràng hơn; trả lời trực tiếp rồi thêm chi tiết hỗ trợ liên kết logic. Cụ thể: bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn (Yes/No + thông tin chính), sửa các thì và cấu trúc như “It was a birthday present from my mother.”, thay “write/writing” bằng động từ đúng (rode/riding), và thêm một câu hỗ trợ có liên từ (for example/so) để làm rõ thói quen.

Example: Yes. I got my first bike when I was ten. It was a birthday present from my mother, and I remember riding it every afternoon with my friends. For example, we often raced along the park path until sunset.

Suggestion: Sắp xếp câu rõ ràng, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và so sánh cụ thể. Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó giải thích nguyên nhân với liên từ (because/so) và nêu một ví dụ cụ thể. Chú ý ngữ pháp (used to vs. usually use), so sánh (faster not more faster), và từ đúng (electric scooters/mopeds).

Example: Not really. Nowadays most people prefer motorbikes, cars or electric scooters because they are faster and more convenient for commuting. For example, many commuters ride a motorbike to work to save time during rush hour.

× It is it was a birthday from my mother and I remember write.

✓ It was a birthday present from my mother and I remember writing.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses and uses incorrect verb forms. 'It was' is correct for past tense; remove the extra 'is'. 'A birthday present' is natural English (not 'a birthday from my mother'). Use the gerund 'writing' after 'remember' to indicate a past habitual action. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently and use 'remember writing' for recalling an action.

× Writing is every day afternoon with my friends.

✓ I used to write every afternoon with my friends.

The original lacks a subject and uses 'writing is' incorrectly. Use a past habitual construction: 'I used to write' or 'I wrote' plus time phrase 'every afternoon'. 'Every day afternoon' is incorrect word order; use 'every afternoon'. Suggestion: include subject and choose correct past habitual form.

× No, in the modern life currently, I think people usually used to modern traffic that there's motorbikes, car or electrical motorbikes because it's more faster and convenient.

✓ No. In modern life, I think people usually prefer modern transportation such as motorbikes, cars, or electric scooters because they are faster and more convenient.

Multiple errors: 'in the modern life currently' is redundant—use 'in modern life'. 'Usually used to' is wrong here; use 'usually prefer' or 'are used to'. 'Traffic' is wrong word choice; 'transportation' fits. Use plural 'cars' and 'electric scooters' (not 'electrical motorbikes'). Comparative 'more faster' is incorrect; use 'faster' or 'more convenient' (keep one comparative form). Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'they are'. Suggestion: simplify phrase, choose correct verbs, and fix comparative adjective forms.