Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike. Then give 1–2 concise supporting details (how you used it, whether you could ride it) using correct verb forms and linking words. Keep it under five sentences and avoid unrelated words (e.g. "bag").

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I couldn't ride it properly and usually only sat on it while an adult pushed me. As a result, I still haven't learned to ride a bike well even now.

Suggestion: Give a clear main idea then support it with specific reasons and linking words. Use correct grammar (articles, plural forms, word order) and more precise vocabulary (affordable, infrastructure). Limit to about 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Example: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. This is because we have good bikeways and bicycles are affordable, so many people choose them instead of cars. Consequently, cycling is a common and practical mode of transport here.

× Yes I can, I have a bag when my childhood but I can't ride this bike and nowadays I'm still don't have the skill.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I couldn't ride it and I still don't have that skill.

Errors: incorrect modal verb 'can' for past possession, wrong noun 'bag' instead of 'bike' (likely typo), incorrect time expression 'when my childhood' should be 'when I was a child', contradictory modal 'can't ride' vs past context, and ungrammatical 'I'm still don't have'. Suggestions: Use past simple for past possession ('had'), use 'when I was a child' for the time phrase, use 'couldn't' or 'could not' for inability in the past, use correct object reference 'it' for the bike, and use 'I still don't have that skill' for present lack. Ensure subject-verb agreement and proper auxiliary verbs for tense consistency.

× Yes I think so bikes more people popular than other transport because we have good bikeways and have comfortable price for bikes and every people can buy this bike.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are more popular than other forms of transport because we have good bikeways, bikes are affordably priced, and everyone can buy one.

Errors: missing verb 'are' after subject 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement), incorrect word order 'more people popular', incorrect noun phrase 'other transport' should be 'other forms of transport', awkward phrase 'have comfortable price' should be 'are affordably priced', and incorrect pronoun 'every people' should be 'everyone' and use appropriate reference 'one' for a bike. Suggestions: Insert the correct copula 'are' with plural subject, use comparative structure 'more popular than', choose natural nouns ('forms of transport'), use adjectives/adverbs correctly for price ('affordably priced'), and use 'everyone' and 'one' for general statements.