Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a complete sentence that directly answers the question and add 1–2 specific supporting details. Use linking words if you add details. Avoid one-word answers. For example, say when you had the bike, how often you used it, or a short memory to make the answer natural and informative.

Example: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it as a birthday present when I was eight, and I used to ride it to my friend’s house every weekend.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and specific supporting details. Use linking words (e.g., because, for example, therefore) and avoid repetitions and mistakes (e.g., 'using' → 'use', 'bag' → 'bike'). Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples such as commuting, affordability, bike lanes, or cultural habits.

Example: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes to work and school. For example, in cities you can see dedicated bike lanes and many office workers cycling during rush hour, which makes biking an affordable and convenient option.

× Yes, because some people using it when they go to their work and then I also see bikes in the streets.

✓ Yes, because some people use them when they go to work and I also see bikes in the streets.

The phrase 'some people using it' lacks the correct auxiliary or verb form. According to the list, this is a verb + -ing form error (ID 8). Replace the -ing form with the base verb 'use' to match the simple present tense for habitual actions. Also change 'it' to 'them' to match the plural 'bikes' and remove 'their' before 'work' because 'go to work' does not need a possessive. Suggestion: use simple present for regular habits ('some people use them when they go to work').

× So I can say the bag is popular in our country.

✓ So I can say bikes are popular in our country.

This sentence contains a sentence structure/word choice error (ID 26). The student likely intended to refer to 'bikes' but wrote 'bag', creating a meaning error and number mismatch. Change 'the bag is popular' to 'bikes are popular' to match the topic and plural form. Also use plural verb 'are' to agree with 'bikes'.