Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 응답은 자연스럽고 명확하지만 더 구체적인 세부사항과 연결어를 추가하면 점수를 올릴 수 있습니다. 예를 들어, 자전거의 특징(색상, 크기), 누구와 탔는지, 어디에서 riding 했는지, 또는 어떤 기억이 남았는지 등을 덧붙이세요. 또한 응답 문장을 두세 문장으로 구성하고 연결어(“and”, “so”, “because”, “when”)를 적절히 사용하여 흐름을 개선하세요.

Example: Yes, I did — I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I loved riding it around my neighborhood. I usually rode with my friends after school, which was fun because we explored different streets and raced each other. Those afternoons are one of my fondest childhood memories.

Suggestion: 좋은 의견 제시지만 문법(주어-동사 일치)과 구체적 근거를 보강하면 더 설득력 있어집니다. ‘it is’ 대신 ‘they are’나 ‘bicycles are’로 수정하고, 통계나 예시(도시명, 자전거 도로, 출퇴근 문화 등)를 덧붙이세요. 또한 연결어(“because”, “for example”, “as a result”)를 사용해 이유와 결과를 명확히 하세요.

Example: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because many people use them for commuting. For example, in my city there are dedicated bike lanes and many office workers cycle to work, so traffic is often less congested during rush hour. As a result, cycling has become a common and practical choice for daily transport.

× Yes, I think it is popular in our country because there are so many bikers in neighborhood.

✓ Yes, I think they are popular in our country because there are so many bikers in the neighborhood.

The subject 'bikes' is plural, so the pronoun referring to them must be plural ('they'). Also 'neighborhood' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific area. Use plural agreement and correct article: 'they are popular' and 'in the neighborhood'. Suggestion: Replace 'it is' with 'they are' to match the plural noun 'bikes', and add 'the' before 'neighborhood'.

× They ride a bicycle when they commute.

✓ They ride bicycles when they commute.

The phrase 'a bicycle' suggests a single item, but 'they' refers to many people, so use the plural noun 'bicycles' rather than the singular with 'a'. This is not an -ing form error strictly, but falls under noun number agreement; adjust to plural to match the subject: 'ride bicycles'. Suggestion: Use plural noun 'bicycles' with 'they' to show multiple people each riding their own.