Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear, grammatical and concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence (past tense), avoid hesitations and incorrect words (e.g. 'bug' → 'bike'). Use one or two supporting details linked with a simple linking word (because/so) and limit to 2–4 short sentences. Example focus points: correct verb tense, word choice, and smoother linking.

Example: Yes, I had a small bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me as a present, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear opinion, use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g. 'no' → 'not very popular'; 'bicycle lanes' instead of 'bicycle based Rd.'), and provide one specific reason linked with a connector (because/so). Keep it to 1–3 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: Not really — bicycles aren't very popular in my city because there are few bicycle lanes and riding can be dangerous on busy roads, so most people prefer motorbikes or cars.

× Yes, I have a really small bug.

✓ Yes, I had a really small bike.

The question asks about the past ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?'), so the student should use past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had'. Also 'bug' is likely a typo for 'bike' given context, so replace with 'bike'. Suggestion: use past simple for past possession and check key nouns for typos.

× When I was a child, my father, uh, bought for me a really nice bike, uh, in result of my uh, instance.

✓ When I was a child, my father bought me a really nice bike because of my persistence.

The original mixes awkward phrasing and wrong preposition order. 'Bought for me' is unnatural in English; use 'bought me' or 'bought a bike for me'. 'In result of' should be 'as a result of' or more naturally 'because of'. 'Instance' is incorrect here; likely the student meant 'insistence' or 'persistence'. Use past simple 'bought' to match the past context. Suggestion: simplify to 'my father bought me a really nice bike because of my persistence' and avoid filler words.

× Actually no, because in my country and specifically in my city there is no no bicycle based Rd. in the city and bikers have very difficulties.

✓ Actually no, because in my country, and specifically in my city, there are no bicycle lanes in the city and cyclists have many difficulties.

Multiple issues: 'there is no no' has repetition and incorrect verb number: use plural 'there are no' for 'lanes' (plural). 'bicycle based Rd.' is incorrect phrase; the correct term is 'bicycle lanes' or 'bike lanes'. 'Bikers' is acceptable but 'cyclists' is more natural. 'Have very difficulties' is ungrammatical; use 'have many difficulties' or 'have great difficulty'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggestions: use correct plural/singular agreement with 'there is/are', choose the proper noun phrase 'bicycle lanes', and use 'many difficulties' or 'great difficulty'.