Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify the main idea and use correct tense and concise sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. yes/no and a brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (past tense) and avoid repetition. Use linking words if adding details: for example, “and”, “also”, or “in fact.”

Example: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small, yellow, two-wheeled bike that I used to ride around my neighborhood. I enjoyed riding it with my friends on weekends.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion and support it with specific reasons and a brief comparison. Use correct tense and smoother linking words like “however”, “but”, “nowadays” or “because.” Avoid filler words such as “sorry.” Keep it to two or three sentences max.

Example: No, I don't think bikes are very popular nowadays. When I was a child, many people used bicycles for short journeys; however, now most people prefer public transport like buses and the subway because it is faster and more convenient.

× Yes, I I have I have a car where I'm able to cheer out. There is a bicycle and two two wheels and it it's yellow color.

✓ Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. It had two wheels and was yellow.

The student is answering a past-tense question about childhood, so verbs should be in the past tense (Grammar Problem Type 5 and 6). Repeating words like 'I I' and 'two two' are filler or errors and should be removed (Grammar Problem Type 26). 'I have a car where I'm able to cheer out' is irrelevant and ungrammatical; the intended meaning is about possessing a bicycle in the past, so use 'I had a bicycle.' 'There is a bicycle and two wheels and it it's yellow color' contains several issues: 'There is' should be past 'It had' or simply state 'It had two wheels' (Grammar Problem Type 3 and 5), 'two wheels' is inherent in 'bicycle' so keep concise, and 'it's yellow color' should be 'was yellow' not 'yellow color' (Grammar Problem Type 13 and 26). Suggestion: keep tense consistent with the question, remove repetitions, and use simple past forms: 'I had a bicycle when I was a child. It had two wheels and was yellow.'

× No, it's not very popular.

✓ No, bicycles are not very popular.

The question asks generally about bikes in the country, so use a plural subject 'bicycles' and present simple 'are' (Grammar Problem Type 6 and 27). 'It's not very popular' incorrectly uses singular 'it' and 'is' which is appropriate only for a singular noun. Improve by saying 'Bicycles are not very popular' to match the general topic and correct subject-verb agreement.

× When I was child the bicycle is very popular, but now everyone will take the transport, public transport, transport like subway, bus and. Sorry.

✓ When I was a child, bicycles were very popular, but now everyone uses public transportation such as the subway and buses.

The speaker refers to the past, so 'When I was child' needs an article and 'child' should be 'a child' (Grammar Problem Type 22). 'the bicycle is very popular' mixes present tense with a past-time reference and uses singular; change to plural past: 'bicycles were very popular' (Grammar Problem Type 5 and 27). 'everyone will take the transport' is incorrect modal/tense and word choice; use present simple 'everyone uses public transportation' to describe a current habit (Grammar Problem Type 7 and 6). List items should be plural ('buses') and 'subway' can be preceded by 'the' depending on dialect; 'public transportation such as the subway and buses' is clear. Also remove trailing 'and. Sorry.' Suggestion: keep tenses consistent (past for past events, present simple for current habits), use correct articles, and use plural nouns for general statements.