Bike— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Replace unclear abbreviations ("Rd.") and fix tense and agreement (e.g. "they were worried I might get injured"). Use a linking word if adding a second reason.

Example: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My parents worried I might get injured if I rode alone, so they preferred I play closer to home. As a result, I only learned to cycle later with supervision.

Suggestion: Begin with a direct answer, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words (e.g. 'because', 'also'). Correct phrasing and word choice: say 'unsuitable' or 'not suitable for people', and use 'roads' instead of 'Rd.' Mention an example or brief comparison to strengthen your point.

Example: No, I don't think cycling is very popular in my country. Firstly, the climate is often hot and humid, which makes daily cycling uncomfortable. Also, many roads are uneven and lack bike lanes, so people prefer motorbikes or cars instead.

× No, I actually didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't really allow me to Rd. something alone because they fear I could get injured.

✓ No, I actually didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents didn't really allow me to ride anywhere alone since they feared I could get injured.

Mixed tense and incorrect verb forms: 'Rd.' is shorthand and should be 'ride'; 'because they fear' is present tense while the rest of the sentence refers to the past, so it should be 'they feared' to match past context. Also 'allow me to ride something alone' is awkward; use 'ride anywhere alone' or 'ride by myself'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent (past for past events) and use full verbs rather than abbreviations.

× No I don't think bikes are popular in my country since the weather in my country is quite humid and hot so I didn't really suit people to ride bike daily and because the infrastructure especially our Rd. is not as smooth to ride bike.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country since the weather is quite humid and hot, so it doesn't really suit people to ride bikes daily, and the infrastructure, especially our roads, is not smooth enough for cycling.

Multiple issues: tense and subject-verb agreement and word choice. 'I didn't really suit people' is incorrect; 'doesn't really suit people' matches the present-tense opinion. 'Ride bike' should be 'ride bikes' or 'cycle'; 'Rd.' should be 'roads'. Use plural 'roads' and 'bikes' for general statements. Also add 'smooth enough for cycling' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: maintain present tense when expressing current opinions and use correct plural forms for general statements.