Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Answer directly with a complete sentence and use the correct prepositions and expressions. Say “I’m a high school student” rather than “I’m attending in high school.” Also, “second grade” may be unclear; specify your year, such as “in my second year of high school.” Add one brief detail about your studies, using a linking word such as “and.”

Example: I’m currently a high school student in my second year. I’m focusing on several subjects, and I’m also preparing for the IELTS exam.

Suggestion: Give a clear answer to the location question first. Use “at home” instead of “in my house,” and separate your ideas with appropriate punctuation and linking words. Correct the tense and phrase “I’m preparing for my IELTS test,” rather than “I’m prepared for my IELTS test.”

Example: I usually study at home, although I sometimes study at school. At the moment, I’m preparing for my IELTS test, so I study quite hard every day.

Suggestion: Start with a direct opinion and then give one or two specific reasons. Use subject–verb agreement: “My home and my school are...” However, because you are mainly describing home, you could say “My home is...” Avoid repetition such as “good” and “beneficial,” and use linking words to connect your reasons naturally.

Example: Yes, my home is a good place to study because it is quiet and comfortable. I can relax there and concentrate better without many distractions. I sometimes study at school as well when I need access to extra resources.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and explain why you do or do not want changes. Correct the verb form: “I’m currently studying.” The phrase “it plays can be improved my concentrates” is unclear; use “it helps me concentrate” or “it improves my concentration.” Avoid repetition and connect your ideas with “because” or “although.”

Example: No, I wouldn’t make any major changes because my study places already suit me. My home is comfortable and quiet, while my school has useful facilities. These places help me concentrate on my IELTS preparation.

Suggestion: State your future plans using clear future forms and the correct expressions. Say “study abroad” rather than “be a study abroad,” and name the subject as “global marketing.” Also, use “IELTS,” not “ILS,” and explain your plan in a logical order with “first” and “then.”

Example: I’m currently preparing for the IELTS because I’d like to study abroad in the future. First, I hope to attend a university overseas, and then I plan to major in global marketing. I’m interested in this field because it combines business and communication.

× I'm currently attending in high school in addition I am a second grade

✓ I'm currently attending high school. In addition, I'm in the second grade.

The verb attend is not followed by the preposition in when referring to an educational institution. Use attend high school, not attend in high school. To describe a school level, use the preposition in: I'm in the second grade.

× I'm studying in my house or school now I'm prepared for my IELTS test so I really study hard

✓ I study at home or at school. Now I'm preparing for my IELTS test, so I study really hard.

Use at home and at school to describe the places where you study. The preposition at is needed before school in this context. Also, the original sentence contains several ideas that should be separated into complete clauses.

× I'm studying in my house or school now I'm prepared for my IELTS test so I really study hard

✓ I study at home or at school. Now I'm preparing for my IELTS test, so I study really hard.

Prepared is a past participle or adjective meaning ready. Because you mean that you are currently getting ready for the test, use the present participle preparing after am: I'm preparing.

× Yes, my home and sometimes at school is really good, a beneficial place for me to be more specific this place can be more comfortable and relaxed for me.

✓ Yes, my home and school are both good, beneficial places for me. More specifically, they are comfortable and relaxing.

The compound subject my home and school is plural, so it requires the plural verb are, not is. The plural noun places is also needed because two locations are being discussed.

× Yes, my home and sometimes at school is really good, a beneficial place for me to be more specific this place can be more comfortable and relaxed for me.

✓ Yes, my home is a beneficial place for me, and I sometimes study at school. More specifically, my home is comfortable and relaxing.

Use at school when describing the location where you study. The phrase sometimes at school cannot function correctly as part of the original subject, so it should be rewritten as I sometimes study at school.

× Yes, my home and sometimes at school is really good, a beneficial place for me to be more specific this place can be more comfortable and relaxed for me.

✓ Yes, my home is a beneficial place for me, and I sometimes study at school. More specifically, my home is comfortable and relaxing.

Relaxed normally describes a person’s emotional state, while relaxing describes something that creates a feeling of calm. Therefore, use relaxing to describe a place.

× Yes, my home and sometimes at school is really good, a beneficial place for me to be more specific this place can be more comfortable and relaxed for me.

✓ Yes, my home is a beneficial place for me, and I sometimes study at school. More specifically, my home is comfortable and relaxing.

The original response combines several independent ideas without clear clause boundaries. Separate the ideas into complete sentences and use linking words such as and and more specifically.

× No, I'm currently study at home and sometimes at school but I I really like this place because it it plays can be improved my concentrates.

✓ No, I'm currently studying at home and sometimes at school, but I really like these places because they help me improve my concentration.

After am, use the present participle form ending in -ing. Therefore, I'm currently study must become I'm currently studying.

× No, I'm currently study at home and sometimes at school but I I really like this place because it it plays can be improved my concentrates.

✓ No, I'm currently studying at home and sometimes at school, but I really like these places because they help me improve my concentration.

The response refers to two locations, home and school, so the plural noun places is required instead of the singular noun place.

× No, I'm currently study at home and sometimes at school but I I really like this place because it it plays can be improved my concentrates.

✓ No, I'm currently studying at home and sometimes at school, but I really like these places because they help me improve my concentration.

The pronouns I and it are unnecessarily repeated. In addition, they does not correctly refer to the two places. Use they to refer to home and school together.

× No, I'm currently study at home and sometimes at school but I I really like this place because it it plays can be improved my concentrates.

✓ No, I'm currently studying at home and sometimes at school, but I really like these places because they help me improve my concentration.

The phrase it plays can be improved my concentrates is not grammatically structured. Use the clear construction they help me improve my concentration, where help is followed by an object and the base verb improve.

× I'm preparing for my ILS so in the future I want to be a study abroad and then I study the global marketing

✓ I'm preparing for my IELTS test, so in the future I want to study abroad and then study global marketing.

Study abroad is a verb phrase, so it cannot follow the article a. Also, global marketing is used as a general field of study, so it normally does not take the definite article the.

× I'm preparing for my ILS so in the future I want to be a study abroad and then I study the global marketing

✓ I'm preparing for my IELTS test, so in the future I want to study abroad and then study global marketing.

The structure want to be a study abroad is incorrect because study abroad is an activity, not a noun referring to a person or object. Use want to study abroad. The two plans should also be parallel: study abroad and then study global marketing.