Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接，但“working for a big company as a pharmaceutical company auditor”表达不够自然，建议说“working for a large pharmaceutical company as an auditor”。可以补充一项具体工作内容或工作感受，使答案更完整；同时注意句末标点和语音停顿。

Example: I’m currently working as an auditor for a large pharmaceutical company in Shanghai. My job involves checking whether the company follows industry regulations and quality standards. It can be demanding, but I find it meaningful because it helps ensure that medicines are safe.

Suggestion: 答案基本回应了学习地点，但语法和用词错误较多，例如“because I very interested”应为“because I’m very interested”，“early languages”可能应为“foreign languages”，“my grama”应为“my grammar”。“signed a class”不自然，应改为“enrolled in a course”。建议先明确地点，再用连接词补充学习目的和课程作用。

Example: I usually study online, mainly at home. I’m taking an online course because I’m very interested in foreign languages and want to improve my spoken English and grammar. My teacher gives me useful feedback and helps me identify areas for improvement.

Suggestion: 观点清楚，也提供了工作时间不固定这一理由，但句子结构和搭配需要改进。“since I have work”应为“since I work”，“at my spare times”应为“in my spare time”，“it make”应为“it makes”。避免使用“efficient, effective”这种重复表达，可具体说明线上学习如何帮助你安排时间。

Example: Yes, I think it’s a convenient place to study. Since I work full-time, I don’t have a fixed schedule, so online classes allow me to study whenever I’m available. As a result, I can use my spare time more efficiently and avoid travelling to a school.

Suggestion: 答案表达了希望出国学习的想法，但没有直接说明希望学习地点做什么改变，而且“monies”应为“money”，“continue my further studying”表达重复，“improve my master degree”不正确。建议先直接回答改变，例如增加面对面互动或改善学习环境，再说明出国留学的计划。

Example: Yes, I’d like my online course to include more face-to-face interaction. Although studying online is convenient, I sometimes miss having discussions with classmates in person. In the long term, if I have enough time and money, I’d like to study for a master’s degree at a university in Germany.

Suggestion: 内容相关，计划也比较明确，但开头“Well, yes”不自然，且“a key to start my new journey in study”过于冗长，“apply a German university”应为“apply to a German university”，“my master degree”应为“a master’s degree”。建议使用“firstly/secondly”时保持平行结构，并说明语言学习与申请目标之间的关系。

Example: My main plan is to prepare for a master’s degree in Germany. First, I need to improve my English so that I can meet the university’s language requirements. I also plan to improve my German, because it will help me communicate more easily and adapt to life there.

× I'm currently working for a big company as a pharmaceutical company auditor and this company is located in Shanghai.

✓ I'm currently working for a big company as an auditor for a pharmaceutical company, and this company is located in Shanghai.

表示“为某家公司担任审计师”时，通常使用“an auditor for a company”，而不是“a company auditor”。另外，“auditor”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“an”。

× Well most of the time I'm studying on the internet because I very interested in early languages and I also signed a class and I kept taking this class to improve my oral English and my grama.

✓ Well, most of the time I'm studying on the internet because I am very interested in early languages, and I also signed a class and kept taking this class to improve my oral English and my grammar.

“I very interested”中缺少系动词“am”。形容词“interested”不能直接作谓语，必须使用“be interested in”。

× I don't have fixed time to rent a place to have continuously study.

✓ I don't have a fixed time to rent a place to have continuously study.

“fixed time”是可数名词单数，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。

× I don't have fixed time to rent a place to have continuously study.

✓ I don't have a fixed time to rent a place to study continuously.

“continuously”修饰“study”，通常放在动词或宾语之后。应说“study continuously”，而不是“continuously study”放在不自然的位置。

× Online school helps me to study at my spare times and it make my time more efficient, effective.

✓ Online school helps me to study in my spare time and it make my time more efficient and effective.

“spare time”表示“空闲时间”时通常是不可数名词，不能使用复数形式“times”。应使用“my spare time”。

× Online school helps me to study at my spare times and it make my time more efficient, effective.

✓ Online school helps me to study in my spare time and it make my time more efficient and effective.

表示“在空闲时间”时，固定搭配是“in my spare time”，不能使用“at my spare time”。

× Online school helps me to study at my spare times and it make my time more efficient, effective.

✓ Online school helps me to study in my spare time and it makes my time more efficient and effective.

主语“it”是第三人称单数，因此一般现在时的动词“make”需要加“-s”，变成“makes”。

× If I have enough monies and time I will go abroad to continue my further studying to improve my master degree.

✓ If I have enough money and time, I will go abroad to continue my further studying to improve my master degree.

“money”通常是不可数名词，表示金钱时不能使用“monies”。这里应使用不可数形式“money”。

× I think the environment plays a very key role to make you have a better environment to study.

✓ I think the environment plays a very key role in creating a better environment for studying.

“play a role”后面表示“在某事中起作用”时，通常使用介词“in”，所以应说“plays a role in creating”。表示“用于学习的环境”时，使用“environment for studying”更合适。

× I want to apply a German university for my master degree.

✓ I want to apply to a German university for my master's degree.

“apply”表示“申请某所大学”时，固定搭配是“apply to a university”，不能说“apply a university”。“apply for”用于表示申请某个项目、职位或学位。

× I want to apply a German university for my master degree.

✓ I want to apply to a German university for a master's degree.

“master's degree”是可数名词单数，表示申请一个硕士学位时，前面需要使用不定冠词“a”。“master's”中的撇号表示“硕士的”。