Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın ve bölümünüzü doğru ifadeyle belirtin: “I’m studying economics at university.” “Economic” sıfat, “economics” ise bölüm adıdır. “I’m lost. Colour.” ifadeleri anlaşılmıyor ve cevabın akıcılığını bozuyor; bunları çıkarın. İki kısa cümleyle öğrenci olduğunuzu ve ne okuduğunuzu açıklamanız yeterlidir.

Example: I’m a university student studying economics. I’m currently in my final year, and I’m particularly interested in international trade.

Suggestion: Cevap doğrudan, anlaşılır ve iki cümlelik uygun bir yapıya sahip. Ancak “I am studying at Eastern University” yerine daha doğal olan “I study at Eastern University” ifadesini kullanabilirsiniz. Cevabı biraz zenginleştirmek için üniversitenin bulunduğu yeri veya ortamını kısa bir ayrıntıyla ekleyin.

Example: I study at Eastern University, which is located in the city centre. I’m in my final year, so I’m currently focusing on completing my degree.

Suggestion: “It’s a good place” doğrudan bir cevap olsa da neden iyi olduğunu açıkça açıklamanız gerekir. “It will help me again” ve “Practical experience” ifadeleri doğal ve tamamlanmış cümleler değildir; bunun yerine “It will help me gain practical experience” deyin. Fikrinizi bir neden ve sonuç bağlantısıyla geliştirin; örneğin “because” ve “so” kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, it’s a good place to study because the lecturers are supportive and the facilities are modern. I’m also excited about starting an internship next semester, as it will help me gain valuable practical experience.

Suggestion: Bu cevapta soruya anlamlı ve anlaşılır bir yanıt verilemiyor. Önce net bir tercih belirtin: “Yes, I’d like the university to make some changes.” Daha sonra tek bir değişiklik ve nedeni söyleyin. “I would you like” yerine “I would like” veya bu soruya uygun olarak “I’d like the university to...” yapısını kullanın. Cevabı 2-3 kısa cümleyle tamamlayın ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Example: Yes, I’d like the university to improve its study areas. More quiet rooms and better equipment would help students concentrate and complete their assignments more effectively.

Suggestion: Cevap soruyla bağlantılı, tamamlanmış ve anlaşılır bir plan sunmuyor. Gelecekte ne okuyacağınızı, nedenini ve mümkünse nerede okuyacağınızı açıkça belirtin. “I will go to yes” ve “because I work there” ifadeleri dilbilgisel ve anlamsal olarak uygun değil. Gelecek planları için “I’m planning to...” veya “I’d like to...” yapılarını kullanarak en az iki ilgili cümle kurun.

Example: After I graduate, I’m planning to take a master’s degree in business administration. I’d like to study abroad because it would give me a broader perspective and improve my career opportunities.

× I'm a student, I'm studying economic in university.

✓ I'm a student, and I'm studying economics at university.

Economics is the name of the academic subject, so it is used instead of the adjective economic. Use economics when referring to the field of study.

× I'm a student, I'm studying economic in university.

✓ I'm a student, and I'm studying economics at university.

Two independent clauses should not be joined only with a comma. Use and to connect them correctly.

× Colour.

✓ I like the colors.

Colour is only a noun and does not form a complete sentence. Add a subject and a verb to express a complete idea.

× I'm excited because I will start an internship next semester and it will help me again. Practical experience.

✓ I'm excited because I will start an internship next semester, and it will help me gain practical experience.

Practical experience is a noun phrase, not a complete sentence. Use it as the object of the verb gain.

× I would you like.

✓ I would like the university to make some changes.

The correct structure is would like + object + to-infinitive. The pronoun you is incorrectly placed after would.

× To and you'll just technique university because.

✓ I would like the university to improve its teaching techniques.

The original words are not arranged into a complete grammatical sentence. Use the structure would like + the university + to improve to explain the desired change.

× I love most there, almost.

✓ I love almost everything there.

Almost should be placed directly before the word or phrase it modifies. Here, it modifies everything, so the natural position is before everything.

× I want.

✓ I want the university to make these changes.

I want is incomplete because want normally needs an object or a following to-infinitive phrase in this context. Add what you want the university to do.

× I will go to yes, I because I work there. I live there.

✓ I will go there because I work and live there.

Use there without the preposition to when referring to a place already understood from the context. The two related verbs can also be joined with and to make the sentence more natural.