Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and clear but has some grammatical issues and could be more natural and concise. Use 'a master's student' and avoid unnecessary clauses. Add a brief linking phrase to show purpose or focus.

Example: I'm a master's student in political science, and my research focuses on migration issues affecting Taiwan.

Suggestion: Good direct response with location details, but there is a likely name error and a slight formality issue. Use the correct name and a short additional detail about the program to enrich the answer with a linking word.

Example: I study at the Institute of Political Economy at National Chengchi University in Taiwan, where I take courses on migration policy and comparative politics.

Suggestion: The idea is positive, but sentence structure and cohesion need improvement. Avoid reporting verbs like 'says' incorrectly; use linking words (because, and) and correct grammar. Keep within 2–4 sentences and provide specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I think it's a great place to study because the professors are collaborative, supportive and approachable, and my classmates often inspire me with their ideas.

Suggestion: The answer is confusing and contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct quantifiers ('few' vs 'a few') and tenses, and explain the effect with a linking word. Be specific about what change you want.

Example: Overall I'm satisfied with my institute, but I would like to see more international students because currently there are very few, and that sometimes makes me feel that the environment is less welcoming to outsiders.

Suggestion: This response is unclear due to several nonsensical phrases and sentence breaks. Provide a concise plan: when you will graduate and where you plan to apply for PhD, using linking words to show sequence. Correct country/institution names and avoid gibberish.

Example: I plan to graduate next semester and then apply for a PhD program in Germany, where I hope to continue researching migration issues.

× Currently, I'm a master student in political science who studies migration issues around Taiwan.

✓ Currently, I'm a master's student in political science who studies migration issues in and around Taiwan.

Use of preposition 'in' or 'around' should be combined correctly; 'around Taiwan' alone is acceptable but 'in and around Taiwan' is clearer. Also 'master student' is incorrect collocation; use 'master's student' to indicate the degree program.

× I study at the Institute of Political Economy at National Chengco University in Taiwan.

✓ I study at the Institute of Political Economy at National Chengchi University in Taiwan.

This sentence mainly has a proper noun spelling issue rather than grammar, but subject-verb agreement is correct. Correction provides the likely correct university name 'National Chengchi University'. Ensure proper nouns are spelled correctly; no change to verb.

× I believe my institute is a great place to focus on studying, says Professors are collaborating, supportive and approachable.

✓ I believe my institute is a great place to study, as professors are collaborative, supportive and approachable.

'to focus on studying' is wordy; 'a great place to study' is more natural. 'says' is incorrect here; use 'as' or 'because' to link clauses. 'Collaborating' should be the adjective 'collaborative'. Maintain parallel adjective forms.

× And also classmates inspired me a lot.

✓ Also, my classmates inspire me a lot.

Tense and subject-verb agreement: original 'classmates inspired' (past) conflicts with ongoing context. Use present simple 'inspire' to indicate ongoing influence. Add 'my' for clarity.

× I must be satisfied with the environment of my Institute, but you are.

✓ I am mostly satisfied with the environment of my institute, but not completely.

'I must be satisfied' is awkward; use 'I am satisfied' to express current state. 'but you are' is unclear and incorrect; replace with explicit contrast. Avoid modal 'must' when stating a feeling.

× I'd say there is a few international students in my institute, so sometimes I felt unwelcomed.

✓ I'd say there are a few international students in my institute, so sometimes I feel unwelcome.

Use 'there are' with plural 'a few international students' (singular 'is' is incorrect). Use present simple 'feel' for ongoing experience rather than past 'felt'. 'Unwelcomed' is incorrect; use adjective 'unwelcome'.

× What are your future study plans?

✓ What are your future study plans?

No grammatical error; present question is correct and matches context. Included for completeness; no change necessary.

× I am planning to graduate next semester with vanishing riding mustard ladies.

✓ I am planning to graduate next semester with high grades.

Original phrase 'vanishing riding mustard ladies' is nonsensical and likely a transcription error. Replace with a plausible academic phrase such as 'with high grades' or specify intended outcome. Ensure sentence structure conveys a clear, relevant meaning.

× Then I am going to apply for PhD in the East. Institute in Germany to keep studying migration issues.

✓ Then I am going to apply for a PhD program at an institute in Germany to continue studying migration issues.

Combine fragmented clauses into a single sentence. Use 'apply for a PhD program' and 'at an institute in Germany' for correct preposition and article use. 'To keep studying' is colloquial; use 'to continue studying'.