Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve fluency and grammar: remove hesitations, use correct verb forms and plural/singular agreement, and make the response more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like "because" to connect ideas.

Example: I'm a student. I've been studying English for the past six months, and I really enjoy it because it has opened up many opportunities for me, such as improving my chances of working with international companies.

Suggestion: Eliminate repetition and improve word order: state location clearly (online or at a school), use correct articles and plural forms, and give one specific detail about each mode of study. Use linking words like "and" or "also".

Example: I usually study online on my laptop, and I also attend a private language school sometimes. The online courses are convenient for self-study, while the school gives me chances to practice speaking with a teacher.

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and specific: give a clear topic sentence and one or two concrete supporting details (e.g., supportive teachers, flexible schedules). Avoid filler phrases and redundancies.

Example: Yes, it's a great place to study. The environment is comfortable and the teachers are very encouraging, which makes it easy to stay motivated and improve quickly.

Suggestion: Avoid casual contractions and filler words, and provide a brief reasoned response. Use one topic sentence and one specific supporting reason or example. Replace vague words like "perfect" and "relaxable" with clearer language.

Example: No, I wouldn't change anything because the school offers flexible schedules and supportive teachers, which suits both students and adults learning the language.

Suggestion: Organize into a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms (study abroad, learn), avoid repetitions, and include concrete aims (which country/subject or skills you want). Use linking words like "so" or "in order to" to show purpose.

Example: I plan to study abroad to improve my English and experience a new culture. For example, I hope to study in the UK to take intensive language courses, meet people from different countries, and gain confidence in speaking.

× I am student actually, I've been studying, uh, English, uh, this, uh, six, uh, 6 past uh, months and I really enjoy it because it's open up, uh, quite a lot of, uh, opportunities.

✓ I am a student actually. I've been studying English for the past six months and I really enjoy it because it has opened up quite a lot of opportunities.

Missing indefinite article before 'student' and incorrect time expression and verb form. Use 'a student' for singular countable noun; use 'for the past six months' to express duration; 'open up' should be past perfect or present perfect: 'has opened up' to show that studying has created opportunities that exist now. Also separate into two sentences for clarity.

× Actually I'm studying courses online courses in my laptop and sometimes I go to the private private school just studying this subject.

✓ Actually I'm studying courses online on my laptop and sometimes I go to a private school to study this subject.

Redundant word 'courses' and repeated 'private', incorrect preposition 'in my laptop' should be 'on my laptop'. Use article 'a private school' for a non-specific singular noun and use 'to study' rather than 'just studying' for purpose. Rearranged for natural English word order.

× Actually, it is a good place to study and it's so comfortable and especially when the people around you, they encourage you to study because they almost like flexible with you and you feel welcomed in that that school and that's all.

✓ Actually, it is a good place to study and it's very comfortable, especially when the people around you encourage you to study because they are flexible with you and you feel welcomed at that school.

Redundant pronoun 'they' after 'people around you' is unnecessary. 'Almost like flexible' is incorrect — use 'are flexible'. Use 'welcome' as an adjective 'feel welcomed' is acceptable but 'feel welcome' is more natural; either is fine. Use preposition 'at that school' rather than repeating 'that' and 'that's all' is unnecessary in this context. Cleaned up for cohesion and correct pronouns and prepositions.

× Actually, I don't wanna to make any changes in that place because it's perfect for the students, for the teachers, for uh, any learners want to learn a new language, so there's nothing to change because it's so relaxable and comfortable for any student.

✓ Actually, I don't want to make any changes to that place because it's perfect for students, for teachers, and for any learners who want to learn a new language, so there's nothing to change because it's so relaxing and comfortable for students.

'Wanna to' is incorrect: use 'want to' (avoid informal 'wanna' in formal speech). Use preposition 'to make changes to' rather than 'in'. Use plural 'students' and 'teachers' without 'the' for general statements. Add relative clause 'who want' to modify 'learners'. 'Relaxable' is not standard; use 'relaxing' or 'comfortable'. Avoid repeating 'any' and 'student' redundantly.

× I would love to, to study abroad and learning this, uh, new language and new skill like English because English, uh, it's international language and I like it.

✓ I would love to study abroad and learn this new language and other skills like English because English is an international language and I like it.

After 'would love to' use the base verb 'study' and 'learn' (not 'learning'). Remove unnecessary comma and filler words. 'It's international language' needs an article: 'is an international language'. Use parallel structure 'learn this new language and other skills'.

× So I love to study abroad to, to meet new people, to learn new skills to, uh, new, new culture.

✓ So I would love to study abroad to meet new people, to learn new skills, and to experience new cultures.

Maintain parallel infinitive structure ('to meet', 'to learn', 'to experience'). Use 'experience' for 'learn culture' and plural 'new cultures' is more natural. Also 'I love to' in the context of a future plan is better as 'I would love to' to match earlier sentence; both are acceptable but adjusted for consistency.