Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答应更自然且语法准确，开头直接回应并简洁说明身份，然后给出必要细节。注意冠词和机构名称的表达，以及专业前置词用法。例如把“in the third year of my college in the UFL major in business”改为“I’m a third-year business major at UFL.”

Example: I’m a third-year business major at UFL. I’m studying full-time and focusing on courses like marketing and management this semester.

Suggestion: 句子需更地道、连贯，避免重复词汇。校名应准确表达，接着用一两句说明学校性质和学习内容，使用连接词使句子流畅。如用“where”或“which”引导定语从句。

Example: I study at Darlin University of Foreign Languages, which is primarily a language-focused institution. There we learn business-related subjects through English to improve both language and professional skills.

Suggestion: 回答要更有逻辑并避免语法错误与冗余。先直接回答，然后给1-2个具体理由。注意使用正确的连接词和名词形式，避免不明词（如“animators”）。用更准确的短语表达“第二语言”。

Example: Yes, definitely. It’s well-known in northeast China for its language programs, and students get plenty of opportunities to use English in practical business contexts, which is very helpful for our future careers.

Suggestion: 回答要更简洁并注意语法和词汇搭配。用动词不定式或虚拟语气表达愿望（e.g. “I would like the school to invest more in…”）。城市名应准确（是否为“Darlin”而非“Delhi”），并避免冗长的细节。

Example: To be honest, I’d like the school to invest more in infrastructure, for example by installing more air conditioners in dormitories and classrooms, because it gets very hot in summer.

Suggestion: 回答要更自然、语法正确，使用短句清楚表达计划与原因。避免口语化模糊表达（如 “kind of”）。可说明时间或具体目标以增加信息量。

Example: I’m considering switching my major to fashion management and studying abroad next year. It’s related to my current business studies but aligns more with my personal interests and career goals.

× I'm currently in the third year of my college in the UFL major in business.

✓ I'm currently in the third year at UFL, majoring in Business.

句子结构不自然且部分短语使用不当。应使用“in the third year at [school]”或“in my third year of [course]”。此外“major in business”在此位置应用现在分词形式“majoring in Business”来表示正在进行的专业状态。建议按“in the third year at + 学校名, majoring in + 专业”表达更地道。

× I'm studying Darlin University of Foreign Language.

✓ I'm studying at Darlin University of Foreign Languages.

缺少介词“at”搭配表示就学地点，且校名复数形式更常见（Foreign Languages）。句子结构需为“study at [学校名]”。

× It is basically in a language school so our daily task is learning business service through English.

✓ It is basically a language school, so our daily task is learning business services through English.

原句中缺少冠词并且名词单复数不当。应为“a language school”。“business service”在此处应为复数“business services”。另外两个分句之间需用逗号或连词使结构清晰。

× Yes, definitely why it is such a famous school in the northeast part of China and a famous for its language.

✓ Yes, definitely. It is a very famous school in the northeast of China and is well known for its language programs.

原句结构混乱，包含多余连接词“why”且重复使用“famous”。需拆成两句或重构为“is ... and is well known for ...”。使用“northeast of China”更地道，且“language programs”比“its language”更清晰。

× So the student in this school in animators can learn language as their second language, which is really helpful for our future career.

✓ So the students in this school, including international students, can learn languages as their second language, which is really helpful for their future careers.

原句主谓不一致（student 应为 students）。“in animators”疑为拼写或词义错误，推测为“international students”。“language”与“their”不一致，应为复数“languages”。代词“their”应与复数名词一致，且“future career”应改为复数“future careers”。建议确定意思后调整单复数和词汇。

× To be honest, I would like to see it has more investment in the infrastructure such as buy more air conditioners in the dormitories and also classrooms, not just for the staffrooms because it's really hot in Delhi.

✓ To be honest, I would like to see more investment in the infrastructure, such as buying more air conditioners for the dormitories and classrooms, not just the staff rooms, because it's really hot in Dalian.

原句中“would like to see it has”结构不正确，正确表达为“would like to see more investment”或“would like it to have more investment”。后半部分“such as buy”应改为动名词“such as buying”。注意地名“Delhi”可能写错，应为“中国大连（Dalian）”；若确为“Delhi”，则无须更改。句子中“staffrooms”应为“staff rooms”。

× I am considering to change my major into fashion management and study abroad, and it is kind of related to what I am studying now, but it adds more personal interest in it.

✓ I am considering changing my major to Fashion Management and studying abroad. It is related to what I am studying now, but it fits my personal interests better.

动词“consider”后应接动名词“changing”，而不是不定式“to change”。“major into”也不自然，应为“change my major to”。第二句可分为两句以提高可读性。“adds more personal interest in it”措辞不自然，应改为“fits my personal interests better”或“matches my personal interests”。