Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and directly state your status first, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and long convoluted phrases. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep the answer within 2–4 sentences.

Example: I am currently a student preparing for entrance exams. I am attending training classes for the subjects I need to complete because I want to pursue higher education soon.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the place, then give one or two specific reasons why you study there. Avoid unclear words and grammar mistakes; check noun/verb forms and word choice. Use linking words such as "because" or "and" to connect reasons coherently.

Example: I usually study at the city library. I go there every day because it has a wide range of updated books and a quiet atmosphere that helps me concentrate.

Suggestion: Answer directly then support with two specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "also." Reduce filler words (uh) and keep sentences crisp. Mention concrete examples (e.g., "study carrels," "quiet reading area") to enhance specificity.

Example: Yes, it is a very good place to study because it offers a large variety of reference books and quiet study areas. Also, since it is away from my home, I can focus without distractions.

Suggestion: Start with a clear opinion, then give two specific, practical suggestions for improvement. Remove fillers and correct grammar (e.g., "more up-to-date books," "organized shelving") and avoid vague statements like "There should be some time." Use linking words like "for example" or "so that."

Example: Yes. I would like the library to add more up-to-date books, especially recent editions in my field, so students can access current information. For example, improved signage and better-organized shelves would help people find books faster.

Suggestion: Give a clear statement of your future goal, then explain one specific current action and a brief reason. Avoid repetition and fillers. Use linking words like "currently" and "because" to connect your plans and preparation clearly.

Example: In the future I want to pursue a doctorate in nursing psychology. Currently, I am preparing for the entrance exam because I hope to gain admission to a nearby university that offers this program.

× Currently, I am preparing for my exams and that will help me to pursue my higher education and I am taking training and classes for the subjects that need to be complete while doing the preparation for.

✓ Currently I am preparing for my exams to pursue higher education, and I am taking training and classes for the subjects that need to be completed during my preparation.

The original sentence is long and awkwardly structured with redundancies and incorrect verb forms ('need to be complete' should be 'need to be completed'). Combine ideas with 'to' to show purpose and use the passive participle 'completed'. Also remove repeated conjunctions for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× For my studies I usually go to the library daily so that I can find various kind of book there.

✓ For my studies I usually go to the library daily so that I can find various kinds of books there.

'Various' requires a plural noun and 'kind' should be plural as 'kinds' when used with 'various', so use 'various kinds of books' or simply 'various books'. Grammar problem type ID:14

× With a new additions in new edition books, sleepers is updated and we can find different kind of content and new.

✓ With new additions in the new edition books, the collection is updated and we can find different kinds of new content.

Many errors: 'a new additions' is incorrect article/number; use 'new additions'. 'sleepers' is likely wrong word; use 'collection' or 'catalogue'. 'different kind of' should be 'different kinds of'. Also reorder words for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yes, I find it is a good place to study. Uh, one reason is we can find variety of books there and also the library environment is very quiet and stress free because it is away from my home.

✓ Yes, I find it a good place to study. One reason is that we can find a variety of books there, and the library environment is very quiet and stress-free because it is away from my home.

Remove unnecessary 'it' after 'find' and add 'that' for clarity. Use 'a variety of books' (article) and hyphenate 'stress-free'. Also avoid fillers like 'uh'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, I think, uh, there should be some more books with new updated additions should be added and uh, they should be placed in a proper way so that every can find without uh, uh, wastage of time.

✓ Yes, I think more newly updated books should be added, and they should be organized properly so that everyone can find them without wasting time.

The original repeats 'should' and 'additions' unnecessarily and misuses 'every'. Use 'newly updated books' or simply 'new books', avoid repetition, use 'everyone' and 'wasting time'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× There should be some time.

✓ There should be more time available for using the library.

The sentence is incomplete and vague. Specify what 'time' refers to; make the noun phrase complete to match the context. Grammar problem type ID:26

× In future, I would like to pursue my higher education that is doctorate in nursing psychology.

✓ In the future, I would like to pursue a doctorate in nursing psychology.

Use 'a doctorate' rather than 'that is doctorate', and include 'the' before 'future'. This corrects the noun phrase and makes the sentence concise. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Currently, I am preparing for the for the entrance exam to get admission in the university that is nearby to my home.

✓ Currently I am preparing for the entrance exam to get admission to the university that is near my home.

Remove the repeated 'for the'. Use 'admission to' not 'admission in', and 'near' (not 'nearby to') is the correct preposition here. Also avoid unnecessary commas. Grammar problem type ID:26