Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms and remove redundancy.

Example: I’m a final-year veterinary student doing my final internship. Currently, I spend most days in a clinic treating animals, and I also visit other institutions for specialized training to gain broader clinical experience.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear sentence, avoid filler words, and give one specific supporting detail. Correct article and plural/singular forms.

Example: I study at the College of Veterinary Science and Animal Husbandry, which is part of the University of Agriculture and Technology in Odisha. It’s one of the oldest veterinary colleges in the region.

Suggestion: Start with a direct opinion sentence, then give two clear, specific reasons using linking words (e.g., because, moreover). Use correct plural forms and avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: Yes, it’s a good place to study because the professors are excellent and the labs are well-equipped. Moreover, its central location makes public transport and shops easily accessible.

Suggestion: Be concise: state the change clearly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Use correct tone and phrasing (e.g., “we don’t have a cafeteria”).

Example: Yes. I would like the college to build a cafeteria because we currently have nowhere convenient to eat or relax between classes. This would make it easier to meet friends and grab a quick meal during free time.

Suggestion: Offer a clear, structured response: state your plan, give a specific field or reason, and mention where or why. Avoid hesitations and finish the sentence. Use linking words for clarity.

Example: I’m planning to pursue a master’s degree in a veterinary-related field, probably in animal health or surgery. I’d prefer to study abroad to gain international experience and access advanced research opportunities, and I’m currently researching programs in Europe and Australia.

× I am a final year veterinary student and I am right now doing my final internship.

✓ I am a final-year veterinary student and I am currently doing my final internship.

Use 'final-year' with a hyphen as a compound adjective before a noun; use 'currently' instead of 'right now' for more formal, natural present continuous context.

× I go to clinic for and treating animals.

✓ I go to the clinic to treat animals.

The original has incorrect verb forms and missing article. Use the article 'the' with 'clinic', use 'to treat' (infinitive) rather than 'for and treating' and make a simple present sentence describing a habitual action.

× It's my normal day and I sometimes go to different institutions for my training.

✓ It's my normal routine, and I sometimes go to different institutions for my training.

'Normal day' is acceptable but 'normal routine' is more natural here; add a comma before 'and' and keep simple present for habitual actions.

× I study in College of Veterinary Science and Animal Husbandry which comes under the University of Agriculture and Technology.

✓ I study at the College of Veterinary Science and Animal Husbandry, which falls under the University of Agriculture and Technology.

Use 'at' for institutions. Add 'the' before the college name. Use a non-defining clause with a comma and use more natural verb 'falls under'.

× Uh, it is in Odessa.

✓ It is in Odessa.

Remove filler 'Uh' in formal response; sentence is otherwise fine.

× It is one of the oldest veterinary College in Odessa.

✓ It is one of the oldest veterinary colleges in Odessa.

Use plural 'colleges' after 'one of the' and lowercase 'colleges'; no article before 'Odessa' needed. Maintain noun plurality for the construction.

× Yes, it is a good place to study because my college is one of the oldest veterinary College in Odisha.

✓ Yes, it is a good place to study because my college is one of the oldest veterinary colleges in Odisha.

Same error: use plural 'colleges' after 'one of the'. Ensure consistent place name 'Odisha' instead of 'Odessa' if intended; if location differs, keep original but be consistent.

× The professors are really good and our lab equipments are also very reliable.

✓ The professors are really good and our lab equipment is also very reliable.

'Equipment' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'equipments'. Keep 'lab equipment' singular and uncountable.

× And also because our college is present in the main city, everything is much easier accessible like public transport or markets.

✓ Also, because our college is located in the main city, everything is much more easily accessible, such as public transport and markets.

Use 'located in' instead of 'present in'; use comparative 'much more easily accessible'; 'easily' is the correct adverb; use 'such as' to introduce examples and use 'and' rather than 'or' for multiple examples.

× Yes, I would like to make a very little change because our college does not own a cafeteria, which is very neat, very much needed as a student, because sometimes you got some free time, you can go to cafeteria or to hang out with our friends, or when you are feeling hungry, you can go to cafeteria and have something to eat.

✓ Yes, I would like a small change because our college does not have a cafeteria, which is much needed by students. Sometimes when you have free time, you could go to a cafeteria to hang out with friends, or when you are hungry, you could go there to get something to eat.

Replace 'does not own' with 'does not have' for facilities. 'Very little change' is awkward; use 'a small change'. Use 'much needed by students' and correct tense: 'you have free time' and modal 'could' or 'can' for possibility. Use articles 'a cafeteria' and avoid repetition.

× Because now I am completing my bachelor's, I would be going for higher studies, most probably masters, uh, in some veterinary related fields.

✓ Now that I am completing my bachelor's degree, I will go on to higher studies, most probably a master's in a veterinary-related field.

Use 'bachelor's degree' and 'will go on to' or 'plan to' for future intention. Use 'master's' with apostrophe and 'a' before it. Hyphenate 'veterinary-related' as a compound adjective and use singular 'field' or plural 'fields' consistently.

× Uh, I would prefer to go to outside India.

✓ I would prefer to go outside India.

Remove filler 'Uh' and drop redundant 'to' after 'go'. The correct phrase is 'go outside India' or 'go abroad'.

× I am taking, I'm seeing different options right now I'll.

✓ I am exploring different options right now.

The original is fragmented and has redundancy. Use 'exploring' or 'considering' with present continuous to indicate ongoing action; remove the trailing 'I'll' which is incomplete.