Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar and pronunciation, and follow a clear structure: start with a direct topic sentence (student), then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers and repetition. Also correct verb forms (e.g., "I'm enrolled in" or "I enrolled in"; "I really enjoy it").

Example: I am a student. I’m currently enrolled in a short-term dietetics course at Gunnarakdev University in Amritsar because I want to apply my biology background to a practical career. I enjoy the course so far because it includes both theory and hands-on practice.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer then give specific relevant details. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., "I have been studying there for about two or three months"; "I really enjoy it"; "the atmosphere is calm and peaceful"). Use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., "because").

Example: I study at Gunnarakdev University, a public university in my hometown. I have been there for about two to three months, and I really enjoy it because the atmosphere is calm and peaceful, which helps me concentrate on my studies.

Suggestion: Give a clear opinion sentence, then support it with two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing; choose accurate words ("friendly teachers", "practical training"). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, it is a very good place to study. The teachers are friendly and supportive, so students feel comfortable asking questions. Also, the university offers practical training and effective learning techniques, which help us apply what we learn in real situations.

Suggestion: Answer directly (No, I wouldn’t change anything) then provide one brief reason with a specific example. Avoid long, unclear repetitions and improve grammar ("I don’t want any changes"; "teachers explain topics clearly").

Example: No, I wouldn’t change anything about the place. The atmosphere is cozy and the teachers are welcoming; for example, they explain topics clearly and give extra demonstrations so everyone understands.

Suggestion: This answer does not address the question. Always respond to the exact question asked: state your future plans in a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific steps or goals using linking words (e.g., "after this course...", "then"). Correct grammar and avoid repeating previous answers.

Example: After finishing this short-term course, I plan to pursue a bachelor’s degree in nutrition or dietetics. Then I hope to gain practical experience through internships at hospitals or clinics to prepare for a professional career as a dietitian.

× That's why I enroll in a short term course and I really enjoying it.

✓ That's why I enrolled in a short-term course and I really enjoy it.

The sentence mixes tenses and uses incorrect verb forms. 'Enroll' should be past tense 'enrolled' to match 'after finishing my high school' (past action leading to current study). 'I really enjoying it' uses the -ing form without an auxiliary; it should be 'I really enjoy it' (simple present) to state a current feeling. Also add a hyphen in 'short-term'. Suggestion: keep tense consistency and use correct verb forms: 'enrolled' and 'enjoy'.

× Well, I'm studying at Gunnarakdev University, it is a public university in my hometown and I have been studying there since for around two or three months and I really enjoying it because they hold the atmosphere was very calm and peaceful.

✓ Well, I'm studying at Gunnarakdev University; it is a public university in my hometown, and I have been studying there for around two or three months, and I really enjoy it because the atmosphere is very calm and peaceful.

Multiple issues: 'since for around' is incorrect: use 'for around' with a duration. 'I really enjoying it' is incorrect; use 'I really enjoy it'. 'they hold the atmosphere was very calm' is ungrammatical and uses wrong subject; replace with 'the atmosphere is very calm'. Maintain present perfect continuous 'have been studying' with 'for' to indicate duration. Use proper punctuation and conjunctions for clarity.

× According to my perspective, I found it, I found it, that place was very fascinating to me.

✓ From my perspective, I find that place very fascinating.

Redundant repetition 'I found it, I found it' is unnecessary. Tense should be present 'I find' to express a current opinion rather than past 'found'. 'According to my perspective' is awkward; 'From my perspective' or 'In my opinion' is natural. Simplify the sentence for clarity.

× Like all of the students like them because the teacher was very friendly and whole.

✓ All of the students like it because the teachers are very friendly and helpful.

Pronoun 'them' is unclear and 'like' repeated; use 'it' to refer to the place. 'Teacher was' suggests singular; context implies plural 'teachers'. 'Whole' is incorrect word choice—likely intended 'helpful' or 'kind'. Ensure subject-pronoun agreement and correct adjective choice.

× The atmosphere like feel like very cozy.

✓ The atmosphere feels very cozy.

Redundant 'like' and incorrect verb form 'feel' after 'atmosphere'; use third-person singular 'feels'. Remove extra 'like'. Keep sentence concise: 'The atmosphere feels very cozy.'

× And because they provide us the best techniques to learn and do some practical work which would become useful.

✓ They provide us with the best techniques to learn and to do practical work that will be useful.

Add preposition 'with' after 'provide'. Use infinitives 'to learn' and 'to do' rather than gerunds for parallelism. 'Which would become useful' is awkward; 'that will be useful' is clearer and matches likely future usefulness.

× And that's why I really enjoy the place where I study.

✓ And that's why I really enjoy the place where I study.

Sentence is grammatically correct but ensure tense matches context (present simple to express a general feeling). No change needed.

× Honestly, seeing that I don't want to make any kind of changes at where I studied because whole the atmosphere was very cozy and friendly like teachers are very welcoming and which was not be like.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to make any changes to the place where I study because the atmosphere is very cozy and friendly, and the teachers are very welcoming.

Multiple errors: 'seeing that' is unnecessary. Use 'to the place where I study' (correct preposition). 'Whole the atmosphere' is incorrect; use 'the atmosphere'. Maintain present tense 'is' for current conditions. Remove 'which was not be like' which is ungrammatical. Simplify sentence structure and correct pronoun references.

× I think it would be perfect for all the students to learn and get more knowledge because they can teach in a more precise way that every students can understand each and every single word.

✓ I think it is perfect for all students to learn and gain more knowledge because they teach in a clear way so that every student can understand every word.

Use 'all students' not 'all the students' (either is possible but shorter is natural). 'Get more knowledge' -> 'gain more knowledge'. 'Teach in a more precise way that every students can understand' should be 'teach in a clear way so that every student can understand'—use singular 'student' after 'every'. Remove redundancy 'each and every single word' to 'every word' for concision.

× Honestly, seeing that I don't want to make any kind of changes at where I studied because whole the atmosphere was very cozy and friendly like teachers are very welcoming and which was not be like.

✓ Honestly, I don't want to make any changes to the place where I study because the atmosphere is cozy and the teachers are very welcoming.

This repeated sentence from earlier contains the same errors: incorrect prepositions ('at where I studied'), tense inconsistency ('studied' vs. 'study'), unnecessary phrases ('seeing that'), and ungrammatical clause 'which was not be like'. Simplify and correct tense and prepositions for clarity.