Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答有信息量，但句子过长且有语法错误与冗余，未直接以主题句开头。建议用一到两句直接回答，然后简短说明原因或计划，注意冠词和被动/主动语态的使用，避免重复表达“high school”与“apply to an university”。

Example: I'm a final-year high school student. I'm focusing on studying and earning professional certificates to make my university applications more competitive.

Suggestion: 回答直接但有重复（多次说“great place to study”）且有小的连接词使用问题。建议先说学校名称和地点，然后用一两点具体理由支持，避免重复并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Example: I study at Washington High School in Taichung City. The teachers are very supportive and friendly, and the school offers a variety of clubs that help students develop practical skills.

Suggestion: 回答简洁但有少量重复与断裂（比如“so”用法）。建议用一至两句直接回应，再用具体例子支持，注意短语连写（well-equipped）和更自然的连接词（for instance/for example）。

Example: Yes, it's a very good place to study. For example, we have a well-equipped modern library and a fully furnished science lab, which make studying and doing experiments much easier.

Suggestion: 答案表达清楚但有语法错误和用词不当（'obtain a new cafeteria'、'has been accused that'、'more healthier'）。建议先直接提出希望的改变，再解释原因并给出具体改进建议，注意比较级与词组用法。

Example: I'd like the school to build a new cafeteria because the current one has hygiene issues. Better equipment and healthier, affordable meal options would improve students' health and satisfaction.

Suggestion: 回答目标明确但冗长重复且有冠词与名词单复数问题（'an university'、'licenses'）。建议直接说明计划并具体化证书类型或专业方向，控制在一到两句内，使用自然表达。

Example: I plan to continue studying and obtain professional certificates in my chosen field, such as programming or engineering certificates, to strengthen my application to Chongqing University.

× Well, I'm currently a high school student in my last year of high school, which means that I have to keep studying hard and obtain more professional certificates in order to make myself more competitive so that I can be successfully applied to an university that I really like.

✓ Well, I'm currently in my last year of high school, which means that I have to keep studying hard and obtain more professional certificates in order to make myself more competitive so that I can successfully apply to a university that I really like.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）。原句存在冗长且结构不当的部分："a high school student in my last year of high school" 重复信息，可简化为 "in my last year of high school"。短语 "be successfully applied to an university" 使用了被动结构且不合适，正确用法应为主动不定式 "successfully apply to a university"。此外，冠词 "an university" 错误，应为 "a university"。建议简化句子结构，使用主动语态，并注意冠词搭配。

× Well, I'm studying in a high school named Washington High School, which is located in Taichung City. I believe that it's a great place to study because the teachers are supportive and super friendly, so that it's really a great place for me to study.

✓ Well, I'm studying at a high school named Washington High School, which is located in Taichung City. I believe it's a great place to study because the teachers are supportive and very friendly, so it's really a great place for me to learn.

问题类型：介词/冠词用法（11/22）。此处“studying in a high school”更常用的搭配是“studying at a high school”。另外，“super friendly”口语化且重复“a great place to study”，可改为“very friendly”并将第二个“study”替换为“learn”以避免重复，使表达更自然。建议注意常用固定搭配（study at a school）并避免重复词语。

× As I just said, the teachers are friendly and supportive and also we have a lot of great facilities. For example, we have a well equipped modern library and science lab. So it's really a great place to study.

✓ As I just said, the teachers are friendly and supportive, and we also have many great facilities. For example, we have a well-equipped modern library and a science lab. So it's really a great place to study.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）和形容词/副词使用（13）。原句缺少并列连词后的逗号并且词序略显混乱，“well equipped”应为复合形容词“well-equipped”并在“library and science lab”之间加冠词以明确并列名词。建议在并列结构中正确使用标点、连词和复合形容词以提高清晰度。

× To be honest, I really want my school to obtain a new cafeteria because the old one has been accused that has a lot of problems that might affect students health. So I really want my school to provide more healthier and affordable meals.

✓ To be honest, I really want my school to build a new cafeteria because the old one has a lot of problems that might affect students' health. So I really want my school to provide healthier and more affordable meals.

问题类型：句子结构错误（26）和形容词/副词使用（13）。原句中“has been accused that has a lot of problems”是不合逻辑且结构错误的表达，应改为“has a lot of problems”。“students health”缺少所有格，应为“students' health”。“more healthier”是典型的比较级错误，不能和“more”一起使用，应为“healthier”，并且形容词顺序“healthier and more affordable”更自然。建议删除不必要的被动表述，使用正确的所有格与比较级表达。

× Well, I plan to study more and get more professional certificates or license in order to make myself more competitive so that I can have the chance to apply to an university that I really like, which is Chongqing University.

✓ Well, I plan to study more and get more professional certificates or licenses in order to make myself more competitive so that I can have the chance to apply to a university that I really like, which is Chongqing University.

问题类型：单复数错误（1）和冠词错误（22）。原句“certificates or license”中“license”应与前面的名词形式一致，改为复数“licenses”或将两者统一为单数。并且“an university”冠词使用错误，应为“a university”。建议保持并列名词的数一致，并注意以元音/辅音发音选择正确冠词。