Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and use correct tense and smoother linking. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers like "uh", and limit to 2–3 sentences. Correct tense (use present perfect or future appropriately) and include one specific reason or example.

Example: I'm a recent high school graduate planning to study for a BBA because I'm interested in marketing. I believe a BBA will give me practical skills such as market research and digital marketing that will help me start a career in advertising.

Suggestion: Answer directly with current situation and future plans in 1–2 sentences. Avoid repeating earlier information and remove hesitations. Use clear linking words like "currently" and "in the future."

Example: At the moment I'm not enrolled in a university; I'm studying English privately to improve my language skills. In the future I plan to enroll in a BBA program at a college.

Suggestion: Be specific about what makes the place good and use clearer structure. Start with a direct statement, then give 1–2 concrete reasons using linking words like "because" or "for example."

Example: Yes, I think it will be a good place to study because the program emphasizes practical training. For example, the college offers internships and hands-on marketing projects that will help me build real-world experience.

Suggestion: Give a clear suggestion and one specific improvement with brief reason. Avoid repeating words and use concise language and linking words like "for example".

Example: Yes. I would like quieter study areas because a peaceful environment improves concentration. For example, having dedicated silent study rooms or better library hours would help students focus.

Suggestion: Give a focused, grammatically correct statement of plans and one specific detail about why and where. Avoid repetition and fillers; use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Example: I plan to enroll in a BBA program at a university because I'm interested in marketing and management. For example, I hope to specialize in digital marketing to develop skills in social media campaigns and consumer analysis.

× I'm a student and I recently passed my class 12 and I planned to study for a BBA program because I'm interested in business and I think it uh is easy to gain some practical skills that will help me to start a career in marketing.

✓ I'm a student and I recently passed my class 12 and I plan to study for a BBA program because I'm interested in business and I think it is easy to gain some practical skills that will help me start a career in marketing.

The sentence mixes past tense 'planned' with present intentions; use present 'plan' to show future intention. Also remove filler 'uh' and the unnecessary 'to' after 'help me'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent for current plans and simplify phrasing.

× As I told you before I have passed my class 12 and currently I am learning English but in near future I would plan to do BBA so I am currently not studying.

✓ As I told you before, I have passed my class 12 and I am currently learning English, but in the near future I plan to do a BBA, so at the moment I am not studying at a university.

Use present progressive 'am learning' is fine, but 'would plan' is incorrect for a definite future intention; use 'plan'. Add article 'a' before BBA and 'the' in 'the near future'. Clarify 'not studying' with context. Punctuation added for clarity.

× Well in near future where I am going to study is a good place because I think the career which I am always wanted to pursue in is help me to gain some skills and all and also it helped me to do work on practical skills.

✓ Well, the place where I am going to study in the near future is a good one because I think the career I have always wanted to pursue will help me gain practical skills and give me opportunities to work on them.

Original sentence has awkward word order and tense errors. Use 'the place where I am going to study in the near future' for clarity. Change 'which I am always wanted to pursue in' to 'I have always wanted to pursue' (present perfect) and make verb agreement: 'will help me gain' (future result) and 'give me opportunities to work on them' for natural expression.

× Yes, in near future where I want to study, the place must be changed because I think a peaceful environment and a calm environment is needed to study and also it improves concentration.

✓ Yes, in the near future where I want to study, the place should be improved because I think a peaceful, calm environment is needed for studying and it also improves concentration.

Using 'must be changed' is too strong and awkward; 'should be improved' is more natural for a suggestion. Add 'the' before 'near future', combine adjectives 'peaceful' and 'calm' with correct order, change 'is needed to study' to 'is needed for studying'.

× As I told you before, my future plans are doing BBA program in a call in a university or a college because I am interested in marketing and management uh, as business is always a strong subject in my school.

✓ As I told you before, my future plan is to do a BBA program at a university or college because I am interested in marketing and management, since business has always been a strong subject for me at school.

Use 'my future plan is to do' rather than 'are doing'. Add article 'a' before BBA and use 'at a university or college'. Replace filler 'uh' and use 'since' for reason. Change 'is always a strong subject in my school' to 'has always been a strong subject for me at school' to correct tense and phrasing.