Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear, concise topic sentence stating your job, then add one or two specific supporting details (how long you have worked there and a relevant responsibility). Use correct tense and avoid repetition. Link ideas with a simple connector if needed.

Example: I work as an editor at an animation company. I started the job three months ago, and I mainly edit short animated clips for online platforms.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer (where you study) then give two specific reasons and a linking word (but/though). Use clearer phrasing for reasons (e.g., ‘to concentrate’ and ‘for a change of environment’). Keep it within two or three sentences.

Example: I usually study at home because I can concentrate better there, but sometimes I go to a café for a change of environment and to stay motivated.

Suggestion: Answer directly whether it is a good place, then give specific reasons and one contrast if necessary. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases; use correct adjectives and simple connectors (however, although).

Example: Yes, my home is a good place to study because it is quiet and comfortable. However, when I study in a café I am sometimes distracted by other people's conversations.

Suggestion: Give a clear statement about whether you would change the place, then give one or two specific changes you would make (e.g., quieter room, better lighting) and explain why. Use complete sentences and logical connectors (because, so).

Example: Yes, I would like a quieter study space because I get distracted by people talking. For exams I would prefer a private room with good lighting so I can concentrate better.

Suggestion: Start with a direct statement of your future study plan, then give specific details about when and why. Use correct time expressions (this weekend/next week) and avoid vague phrases. Limit to two sentences.

Example: This weekend I plan to study at a café because I arrange my study schedule during weekdays and prefer a different environment on weekends. I find the café helps me stay focused later in the morning.

× Because I started to work since three months ago, because I studied, I have studied, I had studied English inter.

✓ I started to work three months ago, and I have been studying English since then.

The sentence mixes past simple, present perfect and past perfect incorrectly. Use 'started... three months ago' (past simple) and 'have been studying since then' (present perfect continuous) to show an action that began in the past and continues to the present. Remove repeated connectors and unnecessary forms for clarity.

× I often study at my home because I can concentrate my tasks, but I sometimes go to the cafe because I want to change my feeling and.

✓ I often study at home because I can concentrate on my tasks, but sometimes I go to a cafe because I want a change of scene.

Use 'at home' is possible but 'study at my home' is awkward; 'at home' is more natural. 'Concentrate on' is the correct preposition. 'The cafe' should be 'a cafe' unless a specific cafe is meant. Replace 'change my feeling' with 'a change of scene' for natural expression and complete the sentence.

× Yes, my home is corrected Co quietly and uh, sometimes I go to the coffee. Uh, I mind someone's voice, but I practice.

✓ Yes, my home is very quiet, and sometimes I go to a coffee shop. I am bothered by other people's voices, but I still practice.

'Corrected Co quietly' is ungrammatical; replace with 'very quiet'. 'Go to the coffee' should be 'go to a coffee shop'. 'I mind someone's voice' should be 'I am bothered by other people's voices' to express the idea clearly. Use proper conjunctions and complete clauses.

× Yes, I would like to change study for sport because I. Mind people's voice so I practice to concentrate my tasks especially during exam so I find.

✓ Yes, I would like to change my study place for somewhere with less noise because I am bothered by people's voices, so I practice concentrating on my tasks, especially during exams.

Pronoun and noun usage is unclear: 'change study for sport' is incorrect; use 'change my study place'. 'I. Mind' is fragmented; use 'I am bothered by'. 'Exam' should be plural 'exams' if speaking generally. Reorder clauses for clarity and correct verb forms ('concentrating').

× I'm going to go to the coffee week that weekend because I make my plan during weekday and I don't wake up early morning but I have brain so I can.

✓ I'm going to go to a cafe next weekend because I make my plans during weekdays and I don't wake up early in the morning, so I can study then.

Use 'next weekend' or 'that weekend' consistently; 'the coffee' should be 'a cafe'. 'Make my plan during weekday' should be 'make my plans during weekdays'. 'Wake up early morning' needs 'in the morning'. 'I have brain so I can' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is probably 'I can study then' — make the purpose clear and complete the sentence.