Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence (I am a student.), correct verb forms and word choice, and avoid repeating phrases. Add one brief supporting detail about what you are studying or why. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences.

Example: I am a student. I have just completed 12th grade and I am currently attending an institute to prepare for the IELTS exam. I study English four hours a day to improve my speaking and writing skills.

Suggestion: Give a clear location and one or two specific details. Use correct prepositions and singular/plural forms. Use linking words like 'also' or 'in addition' correctly to make sentences coherent.

Example: I study at a language center near my home that specialises in IELTS preparation. It has comfortable classrooms and study materials, and the teachers also give extra practice tests.

Suggestion: Answer directly then support with specific, relevant details. Use present tense consistently and avoid vague phrases like 'some extra stuff.' Organise details with linking words such as 'for example' or 'for instance.'

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study. For example, the classrooms are air-conditioned and there is clean drinking water, and the teachers are experienced. They also give homework and online materials to practise at home.

Suggestion: State the change clearly and give a concise reason with a personal example. Use correct sentence structure and fewer repetitions. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect cause and effect.

Example: Yes, I would like them to replace the benches and chairs because they are uncomfortable. For example, long classes make my back hurt, so better seats would improve students' concentration and comfort.

Suggestion: Give a clear, chronological plan with correct verb forms and precise vocabulary. Use linking words like 'after' and 'then' to show sequence. Be specific about the subject and destination if possible.

Example: I am currently preparing for an entrance exam. After I pass it, I plan to apply for a study visa to study abroad, preferably in an engineering college. I hope to specialise in mechanical engineering and gain international experience.

× I am a student. I recently committed my 12th grade and now I studied.

✓ I am a student. I recently completed my 12th grade and now I am studying.

Two tense problems: 'committed' is wrong verb choice and past simple should be 'completed'. 'Now I studied' mixes past with 'now' so use present continuous 'I am studying'. Use 'completed' for finishing an academic year and 'am studying' for current ongoing action.

× I studied in institute to clear my to prepare for IELTS exam.

✓ I studied at an institute to prepare for the IELTS exam.

Use 'studied' (past) is acceptable if referring to past enrollment, but the phrase had extra words and wrong preposition. Use 'at an institute' and 'to prepare for the IELTS exam'. Also include the article 'the' before 'IELTS exam'.

× I study in in oil center to prepare for IELTS exam.

✓ I study at an oil center to prepare for the IELTS exam.

Use 'at' with places like centers. Remove duplicate 'in'. Add article 'the' before 'IELTS exam'. If 'oil center' is a proper name, capitalize accordingly.

× In that center there a lot of accommodations.

✓ There are a lot of accommodations at that center.

The original word order is awkward and missing the verb 'are'. Use 'There are' for existence and place the location phrase at the end or start: 'There are a lot of accommodations at that center.'

× Also they provide me a lot of stuff towards the IELTS exam.

✓ They also provide me with a lot of materials for the IELTS exam.

Use 'provide someone with something' and 'materials' is more appropriate than 'stuff'. Use 'for the IELTS exam' rather than 'towards'.

× Yes, that definitely the center was so good.

✓ Yes, the center is definitely very good.

Tense mismatch and unnecessary words: use present simple 'is' to answer current quality. Remove 'that' and 'was' and replace 'so good' with 'very good' or keep 'so' informally.

× There are a lot of facilities available like the cold water, the AC and the good teachers.

✓ There are a lot of facilities available, such as cold water, air conditioning, and good teachers.

Use 'such as' to list examples. 'AC' expanded to 'air conditioning' for formality. Articles 'the' are unnecessary before general items. Keep 'There are' which is correct.

× Also they provide some extra stuff to study from home.

✓ They also provide some extra materials to study at home.

Use 'study at home' not 'from home' in this context. Replace 'stuff' with 'materials' for clarity.

× Yes, I like to make a change where I study.

✓ Yes, I would like to make some changes to the place where I study.

Use conditional 'would like' for polite desire. 'Make a change where I study' is awkward; use 'make changes to the place where I study.'

× So the change are I like to replace the bench and the chair of the institution center because the chair was so uncomfortable for the student and I personally feel back pain.

✓ So the changes are: I would like to replace the benches and chairs of the institution because the chairs are very uncomfortable for students and I personally feel back pain.

Plural agreement: 'change' -> 'changes', 'are' agrees with plural. Use plural 'benches and chairs' and 'chairs are' (present) since it's a general statement. Use 'students' plural. Use 'would like' for polite request and 'feel back pain' is acceptable but could be 'I have back pain'.

× Now I am prepared for health exam.

✓ Now I am preparing for the health exam.

Use present continuous 'am preparing' to describe current preparation. 'Prepared' means ready; if they mean currently studying, use 'preparing'. Add 'the' before 'health exam'.

× After clear my exam, I apply for study visa in abroad because there are a lot of study facilities available.

✓ After I clear my exam, I will apply for a study visa abroad because there are a lot of study opportunities available.

Use conditional/future plan: 'After I clear my exam, I will apply...' or 'After I pass...' Use 'apply for a study visa abroad' (no 'in'). 'Study facilities' is better as 'study opportunities' or 'educational facilities'.

× So I like to study in the engineering college for my further education.

✓ So I would like to study at an engineering college for my further education.

Use 'would like' for polite intention and 'at an engineering college' with preposition 'at' and indefinite article 'an'. 'In the engineering college' sounds unnatural unless referring to a specific known college.