Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar: use present continuous for current action and correct prepositions. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one brief supporting detail. Avoid filler words.

Example: I’ve just finished my 12th grade, and at the moment I’m improving my English communication skills. I’m taking a short course so I can apply to universities abroad next year.

Suggestion: Use consistent tense and give a clear location with a linking phrase. Remove hesitations and redundant timing detail unless relevant. One sentence topic, one supporting detail with a linking word.

Example: I study at a language institute near my home. It’s only a five- to ten-minute walk away, so it’s very convenient for me to attend classes regularly.

Suggestion: Answer directly, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and be specific about why it’s good. Use one linking word to add a reason and a brief example.

Example: Yes, it’s a very good place to study. In addition, it has a cozy atmosphere and experienced teachers who give useful feedback that has helped me improve my speaking and pronunciation.

Suggestion: Be decisive and organized: state your opinion clearly, then give one specific suggestion. Use linking words (however, because) and avoid repetition and fillers.

Example: I think the institute is fine, but I would like it to be expanded because it’s often crowded. For example, adding another classroom would reduce noise and make lessons more effective.

Suggestion: Respond directly about study plans, not just dreams. Use correct tense and be specific about steps (study, course, skills). Keep to two sentences with linking word.

Example: My plan is to study business and entrepreneurship at university abroad. To prepare, I’m improving my English and planning to take a foundation course in business next year so I can gain the skills needed to start a company.

× I just crossed my 12th and for the time being I am working on my communication skill for further study in abroad.

✓ I just finished my 12th grade and, for the time being, I am working on my communication skills for further study abroad.

Errors: 'crossed my 12th' is nonstandard; use 'finished my 12th grade'. 'communication skill' should be plural 'communication skills'. 'in abroad' incorrect preposition; use 'abroad' without 'in'. Also add commas for clarity. These changes correct verb choice and present continuous usage and preposition.

× I I worked on my communication skills in my nearby institute.

✓ I worked on my communication skills at a nearby institute.

Use past tense 'worked' is acceptable, but preposition 'in' with 'nearby institute' is awkward; use 'at a nearby institute'. Also remove duplicated 'I' and use an article 'a' before 'nearby institute'.

× I uh, within 5 to 10 minutes, we reached, uh, my institute.

✓ It took me about 5 to 10 minutes to reach my institute.

Original is disfluent and uses an incorrect subject 'we' when speaker refers to self. Rephrase to clear subject-verb-object order: 'It took me... to reach my institute.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× Yes, uh, it is very famous in my city and I really like their environment because there are everything very cozy and my teachers is also help me to improve my English.

✓ Yes, it is very famous in my city and I really like the environment because everything there is very cozy, and my teachers also help me improve my English.

Errors: 'their environment' incorrect possessive; use 'the environment' or 'its environment'. 'there are everything very cozy' mixes 'there are' with 'everything'; correct is 'everything there is very cozy' or 'everything is very cozy'. 'my teachers is' subject-verb agreement: 'teachers' plural needs 'are' or better 'teachers also help'. Remove extra 'to' in 'help me to improve' or keep 'help me improve'. Fixed quantifier and agreement issues.

× No, I don't know. Uh, there are changes, but yes, I think there are many students. So that's why I think they're only, uh, area expand. Uh, which more update update my institute.

✓ No, I'm not sure. There have been some changes, and I think there are many students. So I think they should expand the area or further update my institute.

Problems: 'I don't know' is vague; 'I'm not sure' is clearer. 'there are changes' better as 'there have been some changes'. 'they're only area expand' is ungrammatical and unclear—use 'they should expand the area'. Repetitive 'update update' corrected to 'further update'. Fixed pronoun reference 'they' to refer to the institute and improved clause structure.

× Since my childhood, I have had only 1 dream. I. I want to become an entrepreneur and I achieve my goal with the focused and hardworking.

✓ Since childhood, I have had only one dream. I want to become an entrepreneur and I will achieve my goal through focus and hard work.

Use 'since childhood' (omit 'my' for natural phrasing). Spell out 'one'. 'I want' is present; to express future attainment, use 'I will achieve'. 'with the focused and hardworking' is incorrect word forms; use 'through focus and hard work' or 'by being focused and hardworking'. This corrects tense usage and noun/adjective forms.