Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 句子有多处语法和搭配错误，表达不够简洁自然。应直接回答并用一到两句补充具体原因或目标，注意主谓一致、时态和固定搭配（例如："in my third year"，"get into my ideal university"，"obtain certificates"）。避免重复信息。

Example: I'm a third-year high school student preparing to get into my ideal university. I'm also studying for English certificates to strengthen my application and stand out among other candidates.

Suggestion: 总体信息清晰，但时态和一致性有误（应使用现在时）。可以合并句子以更自然流畅，增加一两个具体例子说明设施或教学特点。注意单复数和代词一致（"my school" 而不是 "our schools"）。

Example: I study at Washington High School in Taichung, which is in central Taiwan. My school emphasizes English education and offers excellent facilities, such as well-equipped language labs and supportive teachers who provide extra tutoring.

Suggestion: 回答重复，显得冗长。应先给出直接肯定句，然后用1-2个具体理由支撑，使用连接词（because, furthermore）。修正语法错误（my school's teachers，has great facilities，e.g. computers, science labs）。避免重复同一结论。

Example: Yes, it's a great place to study because my school's teachers are supportive and encourage critical thinking. Moreover, the campus has modern facilities like computer suites and well-equipped science labs that help students learn practically.

Suggestion: 表达含糊且有语法错误（maintain a new cafeterias），用词不当。应直接说明希望的改变并给出具体理由和可能的改进方式，注意单复数和名词搭配（a new cafeteria 或 maintain the cafeteria）。避免口头语和停顿。

Example: Yes, I would like the school to improve the cafeteria by offering more affordable, healthy meal options. Healthier food would help students stay focused in class and perform better academically.

Suggestion: 表达含混且有多处错误（maintain a better English skills，pass the outlets in settings）。应直接陈述具体计划（例如提高听说读写某项），说明如何实现（参加课程、练习、考取哪种证书），并修正语法。尽量用清晰的目标和步骤。

Example: I plan to improve my English skills—especially speaking and writing—by taking weekly conversation classes and practising past IELTS tasks. I also intend to obtain recognized certificates like TOEFL or Cambridge exams to strengthen my university applications.

× I am currently a high school students.

✓ I am currently a high school student.

句子中主语为单数（I），表语应使用单数名词。原句使用了复数名词“students”，与主语不一致。建议将复数改为单数：student。

× I in my third year of high school.

✓ I am in my third year of high school.

该句缺少系动词“am”，导致句子不完整。需要加上适当的be动词构成完整的主系表结构。建议在I后加上am。

× The reason why I study is because that I want to get into ideal university.

✓ The reason I study is that I want to get into my ideal university.

句子中存在冗余与结构错误：“The reason why... is because...”属于重复表达，应改为“The reason... is that...”。另外缺少冠词修饰“ideal university”，应为“my ideal university”。建议使用“The reason I study is that I want to get into my ideal university.”

× In addition, I also get some certificates in order to show myself as a competitive one.

✓ In addition, I also obtain some certificates to present myself as a competitive candidate.

原句中“show myself as a competitive one”用词不自然且代词/名词搭配不当。应使用“present myself”并用“candidate”或“applicant”更契合语境。建议改为“present myself as a competitive candidate”。同时“get”改为更正式的“obtain”。

× I studied in a high school named Washington High School.

✓ I study at a high school named Washington High School.

问题在时态：面试中询问现在的学习情况，应使用现在时“study”，而不是过去时“studied”。此外介词用法更常见为“study at a high school”。建议改为现在时。

× The school is located in Taichung, which is in the center of Taiwan.

✓ The school is located in Taichung, which is in the center of Taiwan.

此句其实语法正确，无需修改。'located in Taichung' 和 'in the center of Taiwan' 用法恰当。故保持原句。

× Our schools specialize in English education and they provide very good facilities and the teachers are friendly and supportive.

✓ Our school specializes in English education; it provides very good facilities, and the teachers are friendly and supportive.

原句中“schools”与后文指代混乱。若指的是本校，应使用单数“school”，动词也改为单数“specializes”。代词一致性也要调整（it而非they）。此外句子可用分号或逗号分隔更自然。

× I believe that is a good place to study because my schools teachers are very friendly and willing to help students to improve their thinking skills.

✓ I believe that it is a good place to study because my school's teachers are very friendly and willing to help students improve their thinking skills.

需要在“That”前加主语“it”。“schools teachers”缺少所有格，应为“school's teachers”。动词“help students to improve”中“不定式to”可省，常用结构为“help students improve”。

× In addition, our school have very great facilities like a computer, classrooms or even science labs.

✓ In addition, our school has great facilities like computers, classrooms, and even science labs.

主谓不一致：主语“school”是单数，动词应为“has”而非“have”。列举时“a computer”改为复数“computers”更自然；“very great”用法冗余，改为“great”。并用and连接最后一项。

× So I believe it's a very good place to study.

✓ So, I believe it's a very good place to study.

原句基本正确，仅需添加逗号以改善语气停顿（非必须）。主要无需语法改动。

× Well yes, I would like my school to maintain a new cafeterias in order to provide more affordable and healthier meals to students because I believe that healthier meals can make children more uh. Concentrated in classes.

✓ Well, yes, I would like my school to build a new cafeteria to provide more affordable and healthier meals to students because I believe that healthier meals can make children more concentrated in class.

多个问题：1) “maintain a new cafeterias”不合逻辑且数不一致，应为“build a new cafeteria”或“maintain the cafeteria”。2) “a new cafeterias”主谓数不一致，混用单复数。3) “concentrated in classes”表达不自然，常用“concentrated in class”。此外句中语气词“uh”应删去书面表达。建议改为“build a new cafeteria”并使用单数形式。

× For my upcoming study plans, I would like to maintain a better English skills in order to pass the outlets in settings.

✓ For my upcoming study plans, I would like to improve my English skills in order to pass the entrance exams.

原句错误较多：1) “maintain a better English skills”数与词问题，应为“improve my English skills”。“maintain”意为维持，不合语境。2) “the outlets in settings”没有意义，推测想表达“entrance exams”或类似。根据语境改为“entrance exams”。建议整体改写为“improve my English skills to pass the entrance exams”。

× In addition, I will get more professional certificates in English in order to make myself more competitive and get me into an ideal university.

✓ In addition, I will obtain more professional certificates in English to make myself more competitive and help me get into my ideal university.

原句中“get me into an ideal university”结构不当，应改为“help me get into my ideal university”或直接“get into my ideal university”。同时“get”可换为更正式的“obtain”。“an ideal university”应为“my ideal university”以表具体目标。