Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clear and direct. Start with a simple topic sentence stating whether you are a student or working, then give 1–2 short supporting details using correct words (e.g., 'IELTS', 'studying'). Avoid long, unclear phrases and filler sounds. Focus on correct verb forms and word order.

Example: I am a student. I am studying for the IELTS because I want to continue my bachelor’s degree in Thailand and apply for scholarships. Right now I am preparing by taking online courses and practicing past tests.

Suggestion: Answer directly with the study location or mode, then give one or two specific details. Use correct grammar for present continuous or simple present (e.g., 'I study online' or 'I am studying at ...'). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Example: I study online. I take structured courses and watch YouTube lessons to improve my skills, and I complete practical exercises on learning apps.

Suggestion: Give a concise evaluation: start with a clear opinion (Yes/No/Sometimes) and then state 1–2 specific reasons using linking words (because, however, but). Keep sentences short and avoid hesitations.

Example: Sometimes it is a good place to study because I can practice at my own pace. However, it is difficult when I don’t understand something because I cannot always get immediate help from a teacher.

Suggestion: Answer clearly and organize your response: state whether you would like changes, then explain one or two specific changes using linking words (for example, 'I would like more live classes with classmates because...'). Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: Yes, I would like more live classes with classmates because we can discuss ideas and practice speaking together. This helps me remember vocabulary and sentence structures better.

Suggestion: Start with a clear plan statement, then give specific steps and conditions. Use correct tenses and vocabulary (e.g., 'after I take the IELTS' and 'if I get a 7 or 8'). Keep it to two sentences max and avoid hesitation.

Example: After I take the IELTS, if I get a band score of 7 or 8, I will apply for scholarships in Thailand. Then I plan to continue my bachelor’s degree at UTCC University.

× Amsterdam long are our going to continue my bachelor degree in Thailand.

✓ I am from Amsterdam and I am going to continue my bachelor's degree in Thailand.

The original sentence has wrong word order and missing verbs and articles (sentence structure error). Rearranged to subject + be + origin, and clarified future intention with 'going to'. Added possessive 'bachelor's' and article where needed. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb order and include necessary articles and possessives.

× Uh, so now I'm preparing my IRTS to uh, test my English level and applying scholarships.

✓ So now I'm preparing for my IELTS to test my English level and applying for scholarships.

Missing prepositions and incorrect verb forms: 'preparing' requires 'for' when followed by a noun (preposition issue), the test name is 'IELTS', and 'applying scholarships' needs 'applying for scholarships'. Keep parallel gerund phrase structure: 'preparing for... and applying for...'.

× So now I'm sturdy ILTS.

✓ So now I'm studying for IELTS.

Incorrect word 'sturdy' should be 'studying' (verb -ing form). Also needs 'for' before the test name and correct test acronym 'IELTS'. Use correct present participle 'studying' to express ongoing action.

× I'm study i.e. LTS on in online class and I'm learning with YouTube and course that they they teach in online and I do I'm project exercise I in application and study.

✓ I study IELTS in online classes; I'm learning from YouTube and online courses, and I do project exercises in applications and study.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb form 'I'm study' should be 'I study' or 'I'm studying' (present tense or present continuous). Unclear test name fixed to 'IELTS'. Prepositions corrected ('in online classes', 'from YouTube', 'online courses'). Repetition removed and sentence divided for clarity. Use consistent verb tense and correct prepositions.

× Uh, sometimes it's good to practice in, uh, don't have any problem like when I'm not understand, uh, I'm when I'm not understand, I don't know when I need to ask and what is the exactly answer.

✓ Sometimes it's good to practice, but there are problems: when I don't understand, I don't know when I should ask and what the exact answer is.

Problems include incorrect tense 'I'm not understand' should be 'I don't understand' (present simple). Missing subject for 'don't have any problem' and wrong word order in 'what is the exactly answer' — correct is 'what the exact answer is'. Use 'should' for advice/time of asking. Simplify into a clearer compound sentence.

× So these are a little problem, but to practice is good to practice and.

✓ So these are small problems, but practicing is still useful.

Awkward and incomplete sentence structure. 'a little problem' should be plural 'small problems'. Rephrase to concise form: use gerund 'practicing' to express the activity and remove repetition. Ensure sentence is complete.

× Uh, yes, I like learning in a class with, uh, studying with a classmate because when we are learning in a class, we can change our idea to each other and, uh, is, can help us remember, uh, the word sentence or information that we need to memorize.

✓ Yes, I like learning in a class with classmates because when we learn together, we can exchange ideas and it can help us remember words, sentences, and information we need to memorize.

Problems: 'change our idea to each other' is incorrect; use 'exchange ideas'. Unnecessary filler words removed. Verb forms standardized: 'when we learn together' (present simple) and 'it can help us remember'. Plural nouns 'words, sentences' corrected. Clarified meaning and fixed modal/auxiliary usage.

× Uh, after I'm test ILTS and I have got Ben 8 or 7 like this, I will apply scholarship in Thailand and I will continue my bachelor degree in Thailand UTCC university.

✓ After I take the IELTS and get a band score of 7 or 8, I will apply for scholarships in Thailand and continue my bachelor's degree at UTCC University in Thailand.

Several tense and word choice errors: 'after I'm test ILTS' should be 'after I take the IELTS' (future sequence). 'have got Ben 8 or 7' corrected to 'get a band score of 7 or 8'. 'Apply scholarship' requires 'apply for scholarships'. Use 'continue my bachelor's degree at UTCC University'. Maintain proper future tense sequence: use present simple for event that precedes future action ('after I take... I will...').