Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct small grammar errors. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid filler words (uh) and incorrect terms like “high school” for a university. Use one or two linking words if needed.

Example: I'm currently a master's student in Statistics and Economics at the National Higher School of Statistics and Applied Economics. I chose this school because I enjoy mathematics and statistical analysis, and its curriculum is strong in both subjects.

Suggestion: Answer directly and add a brief specific detail to enrich the reply. Use correct prepositions and keep it to one or two sentences. You could mention the region or a feature to be more informative.

Example: I study at the National Higher School of Statistics and Applied Economics in a small town called Kolea, which is about 30 kilometers from the capital and has a quiet campus environment.

Suggestion: Correct grammar (e.g., “an amazing place”) and be specific rather than vague. Use linking words to structure the reason (e.g., because, and). Avoid unclear phrases like “UH students.” Provide one concrete example of why it is good.

Example: Yes, it is an excellent place to study because the faculty are highly qualified and supportive, and the classes are small, which allows for more one-on-one guidance from professors.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar (e.g., “I would suggest opening more cafeterias” and “students don’t have”). Remove repetition and filler words. Give a brief reason and, if possible, a short consequence or benefit of the change.

Example: Yes, I would suggest opening more cafeterias and small restaurants on campus because currently students have few dining options, which makes it hard to find affordable meals between classes.

Suggestion: Be precise with terminology (e.g., “an engineering degree” or “a master's/PhD” if appropriate). Avoid informal phrases like “gonna” and unclear expressions such as “multiple international company.” State a clear plan with logical steps and use linking words (first, then, finally).

Example: First, I plan to complete an engineering degree in data science or a related field. Then I intend to gain work experience in industry before founding an international company that offers statistical consulting and economic research services.

× I'm currently a student.

✓ I'm currently a student.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct and uses present continuous appropriately to describe current status.

× I'm doing my master degree in statistics and economics in the National Higher School of Statistics and Applied Economics.

✓ I'm doing my master's degree in statistics and economics at the National Higher School of Statistics and Applied Economics.

Use the possessive form master's for degree names and the preposition at for institutions. Also 'doing' + degree is acceptable, but 'doing my master's degree' is the standard expression.

× I choose this, uh, high school because I like mathematics and statistics.

✓ I chose this school because I like mathematics and statistics.

Verb tense should be past (chose) because the decision happened earlier. Also 'high school' is wrong for a higher education institution; use 'school' or 'institution'. Preposition not needed here.

× I'm studying in the National Higher School of Statistics and Applied Economics in a small village called Kolea.

✓ I'm studying at the National Higher School of Statistics and Applied Economics in a small town called Kolea.

Use at for institutions. 'Village' may be acceptable but 'town' is commonly used; if it is indeed a village, keep 'village'. 'In' before the place is okay for location but change institution preposition to at.

× Yes, it is amazing place when it comes to education because there is a lot of nice teachers and qualified professors and a lot of UH students.

✓ Yes, it is an amazing place when it comes to education because there are a lot of good teachers and qualified professors and many students.

Add the article an before 'amazing place'. Use plural verb 'are' with 'a lot of' plural nouns. 'Nice' is informal; 'good' is clearer. 'UH students' is unclear—replace with 'students' or clarify abbreviation. Use 'many' for countable plural 'students'.

× Yes, I would suggest to open more cafeterias and restaurants because uh, the students doesn't have a place where where where they eat or where they drink.

✓ Yes, I would suggest opening more cafeterias and restaurants because the students don't have a place where they can eat or drink.

After 'suggest' use the gerund opening, not to + verb. Subject-verb agreement: 'students' plural takes 'don't' not 'doesn't'. Remove repeated words and add 'can' for ability.

× Well, basically I'm planning to get my engineer degree, then I'm gonna try to create my own company in the field of statistics and economics.

✓ Well, basically I'm planning to get my engineering degree, then I'm going to try to create my own company in the field of statistics and economics.

Use the correct noun 'engineering degree'. Replace colloquial 'gonna' with 'going to' for formal speech/test. Tense 'am planning' + 'am going to try' matches future intention.

× I'm trying to be a multiple international company.

✓ I'm trying to create an international company with multiple branches.

The original mixes first-person intention with company description. Use 'create' for starting a company. 'Multiple international company' is ungrammatical; clarify meaning — e.g., 'an international company with multiple branches' or 'a multinational company'. Use the indefinite article an before words starting with vowel sound.