Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise, correct grammar and avoid hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct institution name phrasing, and use correct verb forms. For example, say where you study and what you study in one or two clear sentences without filler words.

Example: I am a student at Canyon University in Mossana. I study English and mathematics.

Suggestion: Answer directly, use correct prepositions and sentence structure, reduce repetition and hesitations. Provide a topic sentence naming the place, then one or two specific supporting details using linking words (because/so/although).

Example: I study at Takani University in Musuna. Although it is far from my home, I enjoy going there because I have friends and I learn many new things.

Suggestion: Give a direct evaluation and add a reason using linking words. Correct adjective and verb forms and avoid fillers. One topic sentence plus one supporting sentence is enough.

Example: Yes, it is a great place to study because the campus is friendly and my classmates are supportive. I feel excited to attend classes and learn new things with my friends.

Suggestion: A one-word answer is insufficient. Provide a clear topic sentence saying whether you would like changes and then give one or two specific changes you would like, using linking words to explain why.

Example: Yes, I would like some changes. For example, I wish the library had longer opening hours so students can study in the evenings, and I would like more quiet study spaces because it is often noisy.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar for plans and be specific. Start with a clear topic sentence (I plan to...) and add details about timing or which language and why. Keep it to two or three sentences without filler.

Example: My future study plans are to complete my baccalaureate degree and then learn a new language, such as Spanish. After graduating, I hope to take a language course abroad to improve my speaking skills.

× I am a student and it's a Canyon University in Mossana, UH.

✓ I am a student and I study at Canyon University in Mossana, UH.

The original uses 'it's a Canyon University' which awkwardly treats the university as a thing with 'there be' structure. Also the verb phrase and preposition are incorrect for expressing attendance. Use 'I study at' to indicate enrollment at a place. Suggestion: Use 'study at [university]' or 'I attend [university]'.

× I studies uh, English and uh math.

✓ I study English and math.

The subject 'I' requires the base form of the verb, not the third person singular 'studies'. Remove the -es ending. Also omit filler words and unnecessary commas. Suggestion: Use 'I study' when the subject is 'I'.

× I study in Takani University, uh, in Musuna.

✓ I study at Takani University in Musuna.

Use the preposition 'at' with institutions like universities. 'In' is acceptable for a city but the correct collocation is 'study at [university] in [city]'. Suggestion: Use 'study at [institution]' and 'in [city]'.

× It's very far from my home and but I enjoy when I go there, uh, because they're my friends and uh, I learn a new things.

✓ It's very far from my home, but I enjoy going there because my friends are there and I learn new things.

The phrase 'and but' is a faulty conjunction combination; choose one conjunction ('but'). 'I enjoy when I go there' is unnatural; use 'I enjoy going there'. 'They're my friends' is ambiguous and inverted here; better 'my friends are there'. 'I learn a new things' has article and number errors. Use 'new things' without 'a'. Suggestion: Use single clear conjunctions, gerund after 'enjoy', correct pronoun placement, and remove unnecessary articles.

× Yes, it's very fantastic to study there and I excited, uh, when I go, uh, with my friends, umm, to learn a new things and, uh.

✓ Yes, it's fantastic to study there and I am excited when I go with my friends to learn new things.

'I excited' lacks the verb 'am' for present simple. Also 'very fantastic' is redundant; 'fantastic' is sufficient. Use 'learn new things' (no 'a'). Remove fillers. Suggestion: Use 'I am excited' for state descriptions and correct noun/quantifier usage.

× My future study plans is uh get uh, baccalaureate and uh learn a new language.

✓ My future study plans are to get a baccalaureate and to learn a new language.

Subject-verb agreement: 'plans' (plural) requires 'are' not 'is'. The verb phrase should use 'to' infinitives after 'plans' (plural), e.g., 'plans are to get' or 'plan to get'. Also include 'a' before 'baccalaureate' if referring to the qualification, and 'a new language' is correct. Suggestion: Use plural verb with plural subject and use infinitive forms after 'plans'.