Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更直接并保持句子简洁；注意主谓一致、时态和冗余词，避免重复（例如“doing and they join”这类错误）；最多控制在3-4句内并提供一两点具体细节（例如常上的课程或参加的运动）。

Example: I'm a Grade 11 student at HANA Experimental High School. I usually attend classes, take part in the English Corner club, and play basketball three times a week. Campus life is lively, with regular clubs and student events.

Suggestion: 回答要结构清晰，先给出学校位置，然后补充通勤方式与时间，注意句子完整性和连接词使用，避免句子断裂与语法错误。

Example: I study at an experimental high school in downtown Zhengzhou. It takes me about 15 minutes to get there by subway, so the school is quite convenient and close to my home.

Suggestion: 回答要用完整句子并提供具体原因或例子；注意语法（如冠词、时态和主谓一致）和用词（’celebrity’用错，应为’alumni’或’graduates’）。最好用连接词使理由连贯。

Example: Yes, I think it's a very good place to study because the school was established in 1957 and has a long history. Many successful alumni graduated from here, and the teachers have a lot of experience in their subjects.

Suggestion: 回答要更具体并给出明确改进项及原因；避免重复与犹豫词（uh, like, maybe）；使用连贯词连接观点和结果，说明改进如何提高学习效率。

Example: Yes, I would. The school buildings and some equipment are quite old since it was built in 1957. For example, the smartboards and desks need replacing; upgrading them would make lessons more effective and comfortable for students.

Suggestion: 回答要条理清晰，避免口头禅和重复（uh, um, maybe）；给出明确专业、准备计划和时间表，使用正确短语（e.g. ‘take the IELTS’, ‘get good grades’），并保持最多4句。

Example: I plan to study food science at university. To prepare, I will focus on improving my grades in biology and chemistry and take the IELTS exam next month. After achieving good results, I will apply to the universities I want to attend.

× I'm currently a grade 11 student from HANA Experimental High School and my daily routine include having some classes and doing and they join the English corner club and doing some sports I think.

✓ I'm currently a grade 11 student at HANA Experimental High School, and my daily routine includes having classes, joining the English Corner club, and doing some sports.

问题类型：现在时态与主谓一致。句子中主语是单数（my daily routine），动词应为第三人称单数形式“includes”，而原句用的是“include”。另外句子结构混乱，多个动名词并列应使用并列形式并去掉多余词语。“from”改为“at”更自然。建议：注意主语是单数时动词用第三人称单数形式，列举活动时使用并列结构。

× I'm studying for an experimental high school and it's located in the city center in Zhengzhou and I usually take subways to school or spend about 15 minutes. It's not too far from. My home.

✓ I study at an experimental high school located in the city center of Zhengzhou. I usually take the subway to school; it takes me about 15 minutes. My home is not too far away.

问题类型：句子结构错误与断句不当。原句使用“studying for”不当，应为“study at”。“take subways”应为单数或定冠词“the subway”。句子被错误断开（“It's not too far from. My home.”）。建议：使用简洁句子，正确介词搭配，保持句子完整。

× Yes, I think so because. The school was built from 1957 it and it has a long history and many celebrity go out from here and the teachers are all has a very deep experience.

✓ Yes, I think so because the school was built in 1957 and it has a long history. Many famous people graduated from here, and the teachers all have a lot of experience.

问题类型：过去时与时态、主谓一致错误。应使用“built in 1957”表示建校年份，而不是“built from 1957”。“many celebrity go out from here”不合语法，正确表达为“many famous people graduated from here”。“the teachers are all has”中主谓不一致，应为“the teachers all have”。建议：注意表示时间的固定搭配，主谓一致，以及用合适词汇（celebrity->famous people/graduates）。

× Yes, I do because my school was built in 1957. So yeah, it is so old and I think the government should change the facilities of my school like the the facility in my school like. The smart board or the task because they are so old and if we change, maybe we will, it will increase our efficiency.

✓ Yes, I do. My school was built in 1957, so it's quite old. I think the government should replace some school facilities, such as the smart boards or the desks, because they are very old. If we replace them, it might increase our efficiency.

问题类型：现在分词/动名词使用及句子结构混乱。原句重复并断句不当（“the facility in my school like. The smart board or the task”），“task”应为“desk”。“change the facilities”在此用“replace”更合适。建议：使用正确名词，避免重复和碎片句，保持并列项一致性（smart boards, desks）。

× Open my future study plans, Maybe I wanna study food in the future. So, uh, I will, uh, study hard and good, uh, and get a good grades about, uh, biology and uh, chemistry. Umm, yeah. And to be honest, the my plan at the moment, I know that uh, maybe about this month. And I like to pet the IELTS. MMM yes and hmm after I get good grades I will apply up the university I want to go.

✓ Regarding my future study plans, maybe I want to study food science in the future. I will study hard and get good grades in biology and chemistry. At the moment, I plan to take the IELTS this month. After I get good grades, I will apply to the university I want to attend.

问题类型：句子结构错误和时态/词形错误。原句含大量口语填充词（uh, umm）且结构混乱。“study food”应更明确为“study food science”；“study hard and good”应为“study hard and get good grades”；“get a good grades”主谓和冠词错误，改为“get good grades”；“like to pet the IELTS”是错拼，应为“take the IELTS”；“apply up the university”应为“apply to the university”。建议：去掉填充词，使用标准表达，注意固定搭配（take the IELTS, apply to a university），保持时态一致。