Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific details. Avoid unnecessary words and correct collocations (e.g., 'I graduated from a +2 science program', 'I am in Kathmandu to prepare for the medical entrance exam').

Example: I recently graduated from a +2 science program, and I am currently in Kathmandu preparing for the national medical entrance exam. This exam is required for admission to medical programs in my country.

Suggestion: Give a direct, well-structured answer: state the place clearly, then one supporting detail. Avoid hesitations and incomplete phrases. Use correct place names or say 'a well-known institute' if you cannot remember the name.

Example: I studied at a +2 science college in Pokhara, and now I am attending a well-known medical entrance institute in Kathmandu that specializes in exam preparation.

Suggestion: Organize your reply: give a clear opinion, then two specific reasons connected with linking words (e.g., 'because' or 'and'). Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and avoid repetition. Keep to three or four sentences maximum.

Example: Yes, it is a very good place to study because the teachers are highly professional and explain topics clearly. Moreover, the classrooms are spacious and well-ventilated, and their online classes are also well-structured and easy to follow.

Suggestion: Start with a balanced opinion, then specify the problems and suggest solutions. Use linking words like 'however' and 'for example'. Be specific about the issue and its impact.

Example: Overall the institute is excellent; however, there are too many students using the same building. For example, girls often wait about 10 minutes to use the bathroom, so the institute should increase the number of toilets and improve cleaning schedules to maintain hygiene.

Suggestion: Clarify the exam name and your plans with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Give a clear primary plan and an alternative, using linking words (e.g., 'or', 'if not'). Avoid incorrect terms like 'insurance' when you mean 'entrance' or 'national-level exam'.

Example: I am currently preparing for the national medical entrance exam, which is required for medical programs. My plan is to study MBBS or BDS in my home country; if I do not get admitted here, I will consider applying to universities abroad.

× I am a student who has just graduated plus 3IN science faculty.

✓ I am a student who has just graduated from the Plus 3 science faculty.

Missing preposition 'from' and incorrect article/capitalization: use 'the Plus 3 science faculty' to refer to a specific program. Also include 'from' after 'graduated' to show source. Suggestion: Use 'graduated from' + program name and capitalize proper nouns consistently.

× Currently I am staying in Kathmandu for common entrance exam which is a must for UH pursuing career in medical field.

✓ Currently I am staying in Kathmandu for the common entrance exam, which is required for pursuing a career in the medical field.

Missing article 'the' before 'common entrance exam' and wrong preposition/phrase 'must for UH pursuing career'. Replace with 'required for pursuing a career in the medical field' for correct preposition and clearer meaning. Suggestion: Use 'for the exam' and 'required for pursuing a career'.

× Well I have passed my plus 3IN science faculty from which what? Which is located in Pokhara and currently I'm studying in Name institute which is renowned for its medical entrance preparation.

✓ I completed my Plus 3 science studies at an institution in Pokhara, and currently I'm studying at Name Institute, which is renowned for medical entrance preparation.

Awkward phrasing and missing prepositions: use 'completed my Plus 3 science studies at' and 'studying at Name Institute'. Combine fragments into a single coherent sentence and add commas for the relative clause. Suggestion: Use 'completed ... at' and 'studying at' and place the relative clause after the institute name.

× The teacher here are excellent and they are very much professional in their job.

✓ The teachers here are excellent and very professional in their jobs.

Subject-verb agreement: 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to match plural verb 'are'. 'Very much professional' is awkward; use 'very professional'. Also 'in their job' -> 'in their jobs' or omit phrase. Suggestion: Ensure plural subject matches verb and prefer 'very professional'.

× I don't I feel comfortable in the classroom as well as the online class they provide are also very good.

✓ I feel comfortable in the classroom, and the online classes they provide are also very good.

Extra 'don't' makes sentence incorrect and adverb placement/confused clauses. Remove 'don't', separate two ideas with 'and', and use plural 'classes' to match 'are'. Suggestion: Avoid double negatives/unneeded words and keep parallel structure for two clauses.

× I think the place I study is fabulous and there are not much thing that they need to change.

✓ I think the place where I study is fabulous and there are not many things that need to be changed.

Use 'many' with countable 'things' (not 'much'), and 'where I study' is more natural than 'the place I study'. Passive 'need to be changed' is clearer than 'they need to change'. Suggestion: Use 'many' for countable nouns and correct relative clause 'where I study'.

× But there are too many students studying in the same building and for girls we have to spend around 10 minutes waiting in queue to get in the bathroom.

✓ But there are too many students studying in the same building, and for girls we have to spend around 10 minutes waiting in a queue to use the bathroom.

Missing article 'a' before 'queue' and use 'use the bathroom' rather than 'get in the bathroom'. Also add comma before conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'a queue' and 'use the bathroom'.

× So I think that need to be changed and the hygiene of the bathroom should be maintained.

✓ So I think that needs to be changed, and the hygiene of the bathroom should be maintained.

Subject-verb agreement/present tense: 'need' should be 'needs' to agree with singular 'that' (referring to the situation). Add comma before conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Match verb to subject: 'that needs'.

× Currently I'm preparing for a common insurance exam.

✓ Currently I'm preparing for a common entrance exam.

Likely word choice error: 'insurance' should be 'entrance' given context. Maintain present continuous for ongoing action. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'entrance'.

× It is a tough National Insurance level which must be passed for pursuing medical and I'm thinking of pursuing medical whether in MBBS or in BDS.

✓ It is a tough national entrance exam that must be passed to pursue medicine, and I'm thinking of studying medicine in either MBBS or BDS.

Incorrect word choices and structures: 'National Insurance level' should be 'national entrance exam'. Use 'that must be passed to pursue medicine' instead of 'for pursuing medical'. 'Whether in MBBS or in BDS' should be 'either MBBS or BDS'. Suggestion: Use 'to pursue medicine' and 'either ... or' for choices.

× I tend to read in my own country and if not I may be apply.

✓ I prefer to study in my own country, and if not, I may apply abroad.

Wrong verb 'read' used for 'study' in this context. 'may be apply' is ungrammatical; correct modal structure is 'may apply'. Also add 'abroad' to clarify 'foreign countries'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer to study' and correct modal verb + base verb 'may apply'.

× I may apply for foreign countries.

✓ I may apply to foreign countries.

Use preposition 'to' with 'apply' (apply to a country or university). Also 'apply for' is used with 'a job' or 'a visa' not with 'countries'. Suggestion: Use 'apply to' and specify institution or country.