Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần nói ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và chính xác; sửa lỗi ngữ pháp cơ bản (ví dụ thì động từ, mạo từ), tránh lặp từ, và thêm liên kết logic. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: chuyên ngành, lý do căng thẳng) và kết thúc ngắn gọn. Chú ý phát âm từ như "study" và "sometimes".

Example: I'm a university student studying at the Faculty of Foreign Languages. Sometimes I feel stressed because of heavy coursework and exams, but I see these challenges as opportunities to improve my skills.

Suggestion: Cần trả lời câu hỏi trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng cấu trúc câu đúng (chủ ngữ - động từ - tân ngữ), tránh lỗi cú pháp và từ vựng sai (ví dụ "wishes" không phù hợp). Thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể về nơi học (ví dụ: vị trí, cơ sở vật chất, môi trường học). Sử dụng liên từ như "and" hoặc "which" để nối ý mạch lạc.

Example: I study at the University of Foreign Languages, which is well known in my city. The campus is spacious and friendly, with helpful teachers and many opportunities to participate in clubs.

Suggestion: Cần dùng câu ngắn và rõ ràng để khẳng định, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, danh từ số nhiều/đơn) và dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ "libraries", "computer rooms", "professional staff"). Tránh các từ không đúng nghĩa và bố cục rối. Thêm 1–2 ví dụ cụ thể về cơ sở vật chất hoặc hỗ trợ của trường.

Example: Yes, it is a very good place to study. The campus is large and has modern facilities, such as well-equipped libraries and computer rooms, and the staff are professional and supportive when students need help.

Suggestion: Cần trình bày ý tưởng rõ ràng và theo trình tự: nêu mong muốn cải thiện, giải thích lý do cụ thể và đề xuất biện pháp. Sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ "I think the school should invest...", "build more study spaces"). Tránh câu không hoàn chỉnh và lặp ý. Dùng liên từ như "for example" hoặc "because" để làm rõ lý do.

Example: I think the school should invest in better equipment and build more study spaces, especially during exam periods, because students often struggle to find quiet places to work.

Suggestion: Cần nói ngắn gọn về kế hoạch chính (du học), nêu lý do cụ thể và lợi ích kèm theo. Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ "study abroad", "learn about different cultures and academic systems", tránh lặp từ như "foreign foreigners"). Dùng liên từ như "so that" hoặc "to" để nối mục đích và kết quả.

Example: In the future I hope to study abroad in a country I've never visited, to learn about different cultures and academic systems, make international friends, and improve my ability to communicate in English.

× I'm a student, I'm study, I'm studying in University of foreign language.

✓ I'm a student. I study at the University of Foreign Language.

Student used incorrect verb forms and capitalization; 'I'm study' is ungrammatical because after 'I' we need a base verb with appropriate tense. Use simple present 'I study' to describe current enrollment and include the preposition 'at' for institutions. Also capitalize proper noun 'University of Foreign Language'.

× I think sometime I feel bit stressed.

✓ I think sometimes I feel a bit stressed.

Missing adverb form and article: use 'sometimes' (adverb) not 'sometime', and 'a bit' needs the indefinite article 'a' before 'bit'.

× I think it's challenge I had to overcome to develop my skill and become a better version.

✓ I think it's a challenge I have had to overcome to develop my skills and become a better version of myself.

Missing article 'a' before 'challenge'; tense/sequence: use present perfect 'have had to' to indicate an ongoing or recent challenge; 'skill' should be plural 'skills' in this context; phrase 'better version' needs 'of myself' to be idiomatic.

× I study at the University of Foreign language is well known, a nice school wishes a large space, and a teacher and friend are friendly and approach.

✓ I study at the University of Foreign Language, which is well known. It is a nice school with a large campus, and the teachers and students are friendly and approachable.

Sentence run-on and wrong word choices: use relative clause 'which is well known' and split into clear sentences. 'Wishes' is incorrect; use 'with' to indicate features. 'Large space' is better as 'large campus'. 'A teacher and friend' should be 'teachers and students' or 'teachers and friends' depending on meaning; 'approach' is wrong form, use adjective 'approachable'.

× I also can show my ability and make friend here.

✓ I can also show my abilities and make friends here.

Word order: 'can also' is more natural than 'also can'; 'ability' should be plural 'abilities' or 'my ability to...' and 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to indicate making friends in general.

× Definitely that's I think yes in a nine detonation.

✓ Definitely, yes, I think so.

Original is unintelligible ('nine detonation' makes no sense). Simplify to natural spoken response: 'Definitely, yes, I think so.'

× The campus quite large and had modern infrastructure to chess libraries with lots of book and computer room and professional profession.

✓ The campus is quite large and has modern infrastructure, such as libraries with lots of books, computer rooms, and professional staff.

Missing verbs and incorrect forms: need 'is' and 'has' for present description. 'to chess libraries' is nonsense; likely 'such as libraries'. 'book' should be plural 'books'; 'computer room' plural 'computer rooms'; 'professional profession' should be 'professional staff' or 'professional faculty'.

× They are always willing to have students when they have difficult goods.

✓ They are always willing to help students when they have difficulties.

'Have students' and 'difficult goods' are incorrect collocations. Use 'help students' and 'difficulties' to express problems students face.

× I take the school should invest in better facilities and equipment.

✓ I think the school should invest in better facilities and equipment.

'I take' is incorrect in this context; use 'I think' to express opinion. 'Should' is correct modal for recommendation.

× Beside build more sales study areas.

✓ Besides, build more small study areas.

Use 'Besides' instead of 'Beside' as a transition. 'sales' is wrong word, probably 'small'. Also add a comma and rephrase to form a complete thought.

× It's for student especially during exemption season.

✓ This would help students, especially during exam season.

'It's for student' is ungrammatical and vague. Use 'This would help students' and correct 'exemption season' to 'exam season'.

× This thing would be more effective way. For student.

✓ This would be a more effective way for students.

Fragmented sentence and missing articles: combine fragments into one sentence, use 'a more effective way' and plural 'students'.

× In the future, I want to carry my dream of study abroad in a country I have never been to before, to learn about culture, academic, make friends and this thing will help me develop ability communicate with foreign foreigners.

✓ In the future, I want to pursue my dream of studying abroad in a country I have never been to before, to learn about the culture and academics, make friends, and improve my ability to communicate with foreigners.

Use 'pursue my dream of studying abroad' for correct collocation. 'Study' -> 'studying'; 'culture, academic' -> 'the culture and academics'; 'this thing will help me develop ability communicate' rephrased to 'improve my ability to communicate'; 'foreign foreigners' is redundant, use 'foreigners'.