Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer concise and well-structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid redundant words and incorrect insertions (e.g., “upload”). Use correct articles and prepositions (e.g., “a bachelor’s degree in the same field”) and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I am a student. I recently finished my intermediate studies in computer science and I plan to pursue a bachelor’s degree in the same field because it will give me better knowledge and more job opportunities.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear subject sentence naming the college and its location, then give one specific, grammatical supporting detail using linking words (for example, 'because' or 'and'). Avoid vague phrasing and incorrect word forms.

Example: I study at NCRT College, which is located near the Sharad Vessels area. It is well known for its strong academic reputation because most students achieve good results in board exams.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples of facilities. Use correct noun forms and concise phrasing (e.g., 'well-equipped laboratories' rather than 'good equipped liberties'). Keep sentences to a maximum of five and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, it is a very good place to study because it has well-equipped laboratories and modern computer rooms. These facilities help students develop practical skills that benefit their future careers.

Suggestion: Answer directly with one topic sentence stating you would like changes, then give two specific, coherent suggestions using linking words (e.g., 'for example' and 'so'). Use correct adjectives and avoid repetition. Check grammar: 'the sports ground is in bad condition' and 'well-equipped' are correct forms.

Example: Yes, I would like some changes to the campus. For example, the sports ground is in bad condition, so I would renovate it with proper equipment and build a clean changing room for students.

Suggestion: Give a clear, chronological plan in 2–3 sentences. Use correct terms ('bachelor’s degree', 'master’s degree') and linking words ('first', 'then', 'after that'). Avoid unclear words like 'sample' and correct verb forms ('I want to get a good job').

Example: First, I want to complete my bachelor’s degree in computer science. Then I plan to pursue a master’s degree in the same field, and after that I hope to find a good job in the IT industry.

× I am a student, recently I finished my intermediate in computer science and now I am planning to do my bachelor degree in same field upload because I want to avail more opportunities and the resources about the my field and also job market.

✓ I am a student. Recently I finished my intermediate studies in computer science, and now I am planning to pursue my bachelor's degree in the same field because I want to access more opportunities, resources related to my field, and the job market.

Errors: run-on sentence, word choice, article usage, preposition use, and awkward phrasing. Suggestions: split into shorter sentences; use 'intermediate studies' or 'intermediate level', use 'pursue my bachelor's degree' not 'do my bachelor degree', include 'the' before 'same field' sometimes optional but 'the same field' is natural, replace 'avail more opportunities' with 'access more opportunities', remove extra 'the' before 'my field'. Fix punctuation and parallel list format. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I study from the NCRT college which is located near the SHARAD vessel and it is famous for the its reputation result and majority of any students from this college gets a good result in board exams.

✓ I study at NCRT College, which is located near the SHARAD Vessels. It is famous for its good reputation, and the majority of students from this college get good results in board exams.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'from' should be 'at' for attendance; 'the its' is redundant; 'reputation result' is wrong collocation — use 'good reputation'; 'majority of any students' should be 'the majority of students'; subject-verb agreement 'students gets' should be 'students get'. Also proper nouns capitalization and pluralization of 'Vessels' may be context-specific. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Yes, it is a very good place to study because it provides a good facilities such as a good equipped liberties and the other more facilities which is which help the students to do practical skills and learn skills which creates benefits in their career and in their.

✓ Yes, it is a very good place to study because it provides good facilities, such as well-equipped laboratories and other facilities that help students develop practical skills and learn abilities that benefit their careers.

Errors: article and adjective misuse ('a good facilities' should be 'good facilities'); 'a good equipped liberties' should be 'well-equipped laboratories'; 'the other more facilities' awkward — use 'other facilities'; relative clause 'which is which help' incorrect — use 'that help'; 'do practical skills' incorrect verb — use 'develop practical skills'; sentence ended incomplete 'and in their.' Remove redundancy and ensure plural nouns. Grammar problem type ID:13

× Yes, I would like to take some changes where I study for example sport ground.

✓ Yes, I would like to make some changes where I study; for example, the sports ground.

Errors: 'take some changes' wrong collocation — use 'make changes'; missing article before 'sports ground' and singular/plural form 'sport ground' should be 'sports ground'; run-on phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Sports ground is nowadays is the bed condition.

✓ The sports ground is in bad condition nowadays.

Errors: missing article 'The', duplicated 'is nowadays is', and misspelling 'bed' should be 'bad'. Word order: 'in bad condition nowadays' is correct. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I want to change and renew what the sport ground with the well equipment and and I want to build a good changing room in the sport ground.

✓ I want to renovate the sports ground with better equipment, and I want to build a good changing room at the sports ground.

Errors: 'change and renew what the sport ground' incorrect structure — use 'renovate the sports ground'; 'well equipment' should be 'better equipment' or 'well-equipped facilities'; duplicate 'and and'; preposition 'in the sport ground' better as 'at the sports ground'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Firstly I want to complete my bachelor degree in sample and then I do my bachelor master in same field and afterward I am to get good job in my field.

✓ Firstly, I want to complete my bachelor's degree in the same field, then I want to do a master's degree in the same field, and afterward I hope to get a good job in my field.

Errors: 'bachelor degree in sample' unclear — likely 'in the same field'; missing possessive apostrophe in 'bachelor's degree'; 'do my bachelor master' incorrect — use 'do a master's degree' or 'pursue a master's degree'; 'I am to get good job' unnatural — use 'I hope to get a good job'. Sentence structure and tense consistency improved. Grammar problem type ID:26