Study— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a direct, concise topic sentence that clearly states your status, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid irrelevant numbers and tense errors. Use correct grammar (present simple) and natural phrasing. Keep to no more than 3–4 short sentences and include a linking word if you add details.

Example: I am a high school student. I have been studying at the same school for three years, and I am currently in class 12. Because I enjoy the teaching style, I plan to continue focusing on science subjects.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence saying where you study (city/region and type of school). Use correct prepositions and avoid pauses and filler words. Add one specific reason using a linking word (e.g., because, as) and give a concrete example of an activity. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I study at a traditional high school in central Vietnam. I chose this school because it offers many outdoor activities, such as weekend sports clubs and field trips, which helped me make friends and stay active.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a topic sentence (Yes/No and reason). Use correct grammar for possession and adjectives ("it has" not "it's have"). Provide one specific reason supporting your opinion and avoid excessive fillers. Use a linking word like "because" or "also".

Example: Yes, it is a good place to study because it has strong academic programs and many outdoor activities. For example, the school offers regular study groups and sports events that balance learning and well-being.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear suggestion and give specific details about the improvements needed. Use modal verbs correctly (e.g., "I hope they will" or "They should") and provide one or two concrete examples. Use a linking word to introduce examples (e.g., "for example").

Example: Yes, I would like some improvements. For example, I hope they will renovate the toilets and replace old classroom tables to make the learning environment cleaner and more comfortable.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence describing your main plan, using correct grammar and article use ("study English" not "plans English I"). Add a reason and a brief timeline. Avoid saying unrealistic timeframes; be specific about what you will do next (e.g., take a course, apply to universities).

Example: I plan to improve my English because I want to study abroad in the UK. Over the next months I will take an intensive English course and prepare my university applications and visa documents.

× I am a student in that time.

✓ I am a student now.

The original phrase 'in that time' is incorrect for present tense context. Use 'now' to indicate the present. Ensure time expressions match the verb tense. Grammar problem type ID:6

× My high school and in my class is 12812 and I have been studying there for three years.

✓ My high school class number is 12812 and I have been studying there for three years.

The original sentence has mixed and misplaced elements ('and in my class') causing a sentence structure error. Rearrange to 'My high school class number is 12812' to clearly state the idea, keeping the present perfect continuous clause for duration. Grammar problem type ID:26

× My study in Taiwan province, it is a traditional high school in central uh, region of Vietnamese.

✓ I study in Taiwan Province; it is a traditional high school in the central region of Vietnam.

The original uses incorrect subject and awkward phrasing ('My study in Taiwan province, it is...'). Use 'I study' for the subject and correct geographic noun 'Vietnam'. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to join related clauses. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Uh, I, uh, choose this school because the, it's have a lot of activity outdoor and.

✓ I chose this school because it has a lot of outdoor activities.

Problems: wrong pronoun usage and verb forms. 'I choose' should be past 'I chose' if referring to a past decision; 'it's have' is incorrect—use 'it has'. 'Activity outdoor' should be 'outdoor activities' (noun plural and adjective order). Grammar problem type ID:12

× Of course it's have a lot of uh, activity, outdoor, uh, and uh, uh education very good.

✓ Of course it has a lot of outdoor activities, and the education is very good.

'It's have' is incorrect because third-person singular requires 'has'. Also reorder 'outdoor activities' and use a clear clause 'the education is very good' to describe quality. Grammar problem type ID:2

× I hope they should should fix toilets or facility for example the table in in class or table.

✓ I hope they will fix the toilets and facilities, for example the tables in class.

Using both 'hope' and 'should' is redundant. After 'I hope' use 'will' or a present tense. Also pluralize 'toilets' and 'facilities' and correct 'table in in class or table' to 'tables in class'. Grammar problem type ID:4

× I have plans English I because I want to study abroad in UK the next month.

✓ I have plans to study English because I want to study abroad in the UK next month.

Missing infinitive 'to study' after 'plans'; include 'the' before 'UK'. Ensure word order: 'plans to study English' and time expression 'next month' stays at end. Grammar problem type ID:6