Opportunities— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời đi đúng trọng tâm và có đề cập đến hai hoạt động cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, cụm “club music” và “club art” chưa tự nhiên; nên nói “a music club” và “an art club”. Bạn nên thêm một câu giải thích về trải nghiệm hoặc cảm nhận để câu trả lời phát triển hơn, đồng thời dùng từ nối như “For example” hoặc “I especially enjoyed...”.

Example: Yes, I had the opportunity to try several new activities, such as joining a music club and an art club. I especially enjoyed the music club because I could learn simple songs and make new friends.

Suggestion: Bạn đã đưa ra ý kiến và lý do, nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ: “many experience” cần sửa thành “a lot of experience” hoặc “many experiences”, còn “live skill” nên là “life skills”. Câu trả lời cũng bị lặp từ “and” và chưa có ví dụ cụ thể. Hãy mở đầu bằng “Yes, I think so” và phát triển theo cấu trúc ý kiến → lý do → ví dụ.

Example: Yes, I think people should try different things because they can gain valuable experience and develop useful life skills. For example, joining a sports club can help young people become healthier and learn how to work in a team.

Suggestion: Bạn thể hiện được quan điểm đồng ý, nhưng câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều cụm từ không tự nhiên. “Live skill” nên là “life skills”; “small heal experience” có thể bạn muốn nói “valuable experience” hoặc “real-life experience”. Ngoài ra, cần kết thúc câu rõ ràng và giải thích cụ thể bạn muốn thử cơ hội nào, chẳng hạn học một kỹ năng mới hoặc tham gia hoạt động cộng đồng.

Example: Yes, I do, because new opportunities help me develop life skills and gain valuable real-life experience. For instance, I would like to join a volunteer project or take a short course in a new subject.

Suggestion: Bạn đã cố gắng đưa ra ví dụ, nhưng “get” bị dùng sai trong ngữ cảnh này; nên nói “I often get new opportunities” hoặc “I often have opportunities”. Cụm “I often guess” không đúng nghĩa, vì “guess” nghĩa là “đoán”. Bạn cũng cần dùng số nhiều “opportunities” và thêm một câu giải thích về cách bạn biết hoặc tận dụng những cơ hội đó.

Example: Yes, I often get new opportunities through my school and my friends. For example, I have been invited to join a music club and a boxing club, and I usually accept these opportunities because they help me learn new skills.

× Yes I think people should have many opportunities because we can have many experience and and live skill.

✓ Yes, I think people should have many opportunities because we can gain many experiences and life skills.

Experiences and skills are countable nouns used after many, so they must be plural. Life skills is the correct plural form for skills that help people in daily life. Also, the repeated conjunction and and was removed.

× Yes I think people should have many opportunities because we can have many experience and and live skill.

✓ Yes, I think people should have many opportunities because we can gain many experiences and life skills.

Many must be followed by a plural countable noun. Therefore, many experience is incorrect; many experiences is correct. Life skills is also the appropriate expression in this context.

× Yes because I want to have more live skill and small heal experience in my country or

✓ Yes, because I want to gain more life skills and some real-life experience in my country.

The original sentence is incomplete because it ends with or and does not provide another alternative. The expressions live skill and small heal experience are also not grammatically appropriate in this context. Life skills and real-life experience are the correct expressions.

× I often guess new opportunity for example is music club or boxing club.

✓ I often get new opportunities; for example, there are music clubs and boxing clubs.

Because the speaker is talking about opportunities in general and uses often, opportunity should be plural: opportunities. The nouns music clubs and boxing clubs are also plural because they refer to types of clubs in general.

× I often guess new opportunity for example is music club or boxing club.

✓ I often get new opportunities; for example, there are music clubs and boxing clubs.

There are is used to introduce more than one thing. Since the sentence refers to music clubs and boxing clubs, there are is required instead of the incorrect structure for example is.