Opportunities— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer responds to the question and includes relevant examples, such as playing football and going on picnics. However, there are several grammar and word-choice problems: use “took part in” or “did” instead of “host,” “a lot of activities” instead of “lot of activities,” and “childhood memories” instead of “my memories I had in my childhood.” Avoid repetition such as “all the all of them,” and finish your answer clearly rather than ending with “I usually get.” Use a simple structure: direct answer, specific examples, and a brief explanation of why you enjoyed them.

Example: Yes, I had several opportunities to try new activities as a child. For example, I often played football with the children in my neighbourhood, and sometimes my family went on picnics in the highlands. These activities gave me happy childhood memories and helped me become more sociable.

Suggestion: You give a clear opinion, but the response is difficult to understand because of incorrect grammar, repetition, and unsuitable vocabulary. Say “Yes, I think people should try different things” rather than “Of course it should be.” Use “break out of their routine” instead of “do some things more interesting without the things they are doing routinely,” and use “more open-minded” or “more adaptable” instead of “more industrial.” Organise the answer with linking words such as “because” and “for example,” and avoid repeating “personal.”

Example: Yes, I think people should try different things whenever possible because it helps them break out of their routine. For example, learning a new skill or travelling to an unfamiliar place can make people more confident and open-minded. However, they should choose activities that genuinely interest them rather than trying everything without a clear purpose.

× Yes, of course I remember in my childhood I host lot of activities such as playing football with neighbourhood kids as well as highland picnic with all the all of them.

✓ Yes, of course. I remember that, in my childhood, I took part in a lot of activities, such as playing football with neighbourhood kids and having picnics in the highlands with all of them.

The question asks about childhood, so the past tense is required. The present-tense verb host should be changed to the past-tense form took part in. Use the phrase take part in activities because the question asks whether you participated in activities.

× Yes, of course I remember in my childhood I host lot of activities such as playing football with neighbourhood kids as well as highland picnic with all the all of them.

✓ Yes, of course. I remember that, in my childhood, I took part in a lot of activities, such as playing football with neighbourhood kids and having picnics in the highlands with all of them.

The quantifier lot cannot be used alone before a plural countable noun. Use a lot of activities or lots of activities. Also, avoid repeating all the all of them.

× I think that was my memories I had in my childhood.

✓ I think those were my memories from childhood.

Memories is plural, so the plural demonstrative those and the plural verb were are needed. The phrase from childhood is more natural and avoids the unnecessary repetition in I had in my childhood.

× Well it's a kind of people who do different things makes them more industrial towards life and as well as the personal or personal.

✓ Well, people who try different things become more open-minded about life and grow personally.

The subject people is plural, so it must take plural verb forms such as become and grow, not makes. The original sentence also has an incomplete structure. Use a clear subject followed by a suitable verb and complement.

× Of course it should be they need to do some things more interesting without the things they are doing routinely in their life.

✓ Of course, people should try different things. They need to do more interesting things instead of doing the things they routinely do in their lives.

The structure it should be they need to is incorrect and does not clearly connect the subject to the verb. Begin with people should try different things. Also, use the structure more interesting things and place the adverb routinely before the verb phrase it modifies.

× Of course it should be they need to do some things more interesting without the things they are doing routinely in their life.

✓ Of course, people should try different things. They need to do more interesting things instead of doing the things they routinely do in their lives.

When their refers to people in general, the noun should normally be plural: lives. Using lives agrees with the plural subject people and sounds more natural in this context.