Tiredness— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答切题，也说明了疲惫的原因。可以把“lecture schedules and work”说得更具体自然，例如提到上课、实习和安排时间；另外，“So”开头略显生硬，可以用“Balancing...”连接前后句。

Example: Yes, I do, especially because I’m a university student and an intern. Balancing classes with my internship can make my weekdays quite busy, so I try to manage my time carefully.

Suggestion: 回答提供了具体时间，但有几处表达不自然：“internship work”中的“work”通常不可数；“I feel tired most”建议改为“I feel most tired”；“on weekend”应改为“at the weekend”或“on weekends”。还可以补充周五特别累的原因。

Example: I feel most tired after a long day at my internship, especially on Fridays. By then, I’ve usually had a busy week, so I like to relax and get plenty of rest at the weekend.

Suggestion: 回答直接，也给出了两种具体活动。注意“which really reduce”与前面的内容搭配不够自然；可以改用“Both activities help me...”表达它们的作用。“regain energy”前也可以补上主语，例如“help me recharge”。

Example: When I feel tired, I usually play video games on my iPad or listen to music. Both activities help me unwind and recharge, especially after a busy day.

Suggestion: 回答立场明确，理由也切题。注意主谓一致，应将“socializing really consume”改为“socializing really consumes”。“staying at home alone”可以改成更自然的“staying at home by myself”；也可以简要说明在家会做什么。

Example: No, not usually. When I’m tired, I prefer staying at home by myself because socializing can take a lot of energy. I’ll usually watch something or just relax.

× I feel tired most after long days full of internship works, especially on Fridays, so I need to have a good rest on weekend.

✓ I feel tired mostly after long days full of internship work, especially on Fridays, so I need to have a good rest on the weekend.

这里想表达“主要在……之后感到疲倦”，应使用副词 mostly，而不是 most。most 通常表示“最……”或“最多”，不能在这里自然地修饰 after。

× I feel tired most after long days full of internship works, especially on Fridays, so I need to have a good rest on weekend.

✓ I feel tired mostly after long days full of internship work, especially on Fridays, so I need to have a good rest on the weekend.

work 表示“工作”这一概念时通常是不可数名词，不能在此处加 -s。应使用 internship work。

× I feel tired most after long days full of internship works, especially on Fridays, so I need to have a good rest on weekend.

✓ I feel tired mostly after long days full of internship work, especially on Fridays, so I need to have a good rest on the weekend.

weekend 前缺少限定词。表示“周末”时可以说 on the weekend；也可以用 on weekends 表示通常每逢周末。

× No, I prefer staying at home alone when I feel tired because I think socializing really consume a lot of energy.

✓ No, I prefer staying at home alone when I feel tired because I think socializing really consumes a lot of energy.

socializing 是动名词短语，在句中作主语，按单数看待。因此一般现在时的谓语动词 consume 应加 -s，改为 consumes。