Tiredness— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you often feel tired?
Candidate
Yes, sometimes I feel tired when I have a large group or ESM and if I start at
Examiner
When would you feel tired?
Candidate
When I have to very work and I must do repair for exam so my grand feel tired.
Examiner
What do you do when you feel tired?
Candidate
I feel tired so I often drink a coffee and I listen to the music.
Examiner
When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?
Candidate
Now, when I feel tired I just want to stay at home to reach that energy.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you often feel tired?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và chưa trả lời rõ tần suất cảm thấy mệt. Cụm “a large group or ESM” không rõ nghĩa, còn “if I start at” bị bỏ dở. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp về tần suất, sau đó nêu một nguyên nhân cụ thể và kết thúc đầy đủ trong tối đa 2–3 câu.
Example: Yes, I sometimes feel tired, especially when I have a large workload at school. I usually feel exhausted after studying for several hours without a break.
When would you feel tired?
Score: 20.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ chưa phù hợp: “have to very work” nên đổi thành “have to work very hard”, “repair for exam” có thể là “prepare for an exam”, và “my grand feel tired” không rõ nghĩa. Hãy nói rõ thời điểm và nguyên nhân, chẳng hạn khi phải học nhiều hoặc chuẩn bị cho kỳ thi. Có thể dùng từ nối “especially when” hoặc “because” để liên kết ý.
Example: I feel tired when I have to work very hard, especially when I am preparing for an important exam. I often stay up late to study, so I do not get enough sleep.
What do you do when you feel tired?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: Câu trả lời đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm và đưa ra hai hoạt động cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, nên dùng “drink coffee” thay vì “drink a coffee” khi nói chung, và “listen to music” thay vì “listen to the music”. Hãy dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn như “When I feel tired, I usually…” và có thể thêm lý do hoặc kết quả để câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Example: When I feel tired, I usually drink some coffee and listen to music. If I have enough time, I also take a short nap because it helps me regain my energy.
When you feel tired, do you still go out with your friends?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: Bạn đã thể hiện được lựa chọn ở nhà, nhưng “Now” không phù hợp với ý câu hỏi và “reach that energy” là cách diễn đạt không tự nhiên. Nên dùng “I prefer to stay at home and regain my energy” hoặc “recharge my batteries”. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp “No” hoặc “Not usually”, rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do.
Example: Not usually. When I feel tired, I prefer to stay at home and recharge my batteries. I might watch a film or take a nap so that I feel better the next day.
Grammar
× Yes, sometimes I feel tired when I have a large group or ESM and if I start at
✓ Yes, sometimes I feel tired when I have a large group or ESM, especially if I start early.
The sentence is incomplete because the phrase 'start at' needs a complement. Use 'start early' when referring generally to beginning work early. Grammar problem type ID: 26.
× When I have to very work and I must do repair for exam so my grand feel tired.
✓ When I have to work very hard and prepare for an exam, I feel tired.
After 'have to,' use the base form of the verb: 'work,' not 'very work.' The adverb 'very hard' correctly describes how you work. The sentence also needs a clearer structure, so the cause and result are connected with a comma rather than using 'so' incorrectly. Grammar problem type ID: 4.
× I feel tired so I often drink a coffee and I listen to the music.
✓ When I feel tired, I often drink coffee and listen to music.
Use 'coffee' without an article when referring to coffee in general. Similarly, use 'music' without 'the' when speaking about music generally. The repeated subject 'I' is unnecessary when the two verbs have the same subject. Grammar problem type ID: 22.
'/%3e%3c/svg%3e)